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In Mother Sky's Womb

in mother sky's womb
                                       thousands of constellations
                                            Father's creations

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Jan Allison

April 14, 2015 at 3:39 PM

oh BL this is so very clever - a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath

April 14, 2015 at 3:43 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your appreciation and for 7. Loved always,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 14, 2015 at 1:40 PM

- Think I forgot the 7 !!!!

Bl Devnath

April 14, 2015 at 3:42 PM

Okay, i have got it. Thanks

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 14, 2015 at 1:38 PM

- ........... 9 months in the mother's womb - 9 months with discomfort and vomiting - A painful birth - ...... do not give the father the greatest honor ........ :)))) - A lovely haiku, dear friend Bl ..... A 7 for the mother !!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

April 14, 2015 at 1:47 PM

Thanks for your guidance and lovely appreciation with credit. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

In Mother Sky's Womb

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