In Midst of Magic

As I wander with my boat watching the sunset
I don’t feel the depth of ocean anymore
Instead I see shining magic for the first time
Blue turns to yellow making the whole world so bright
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 12:54 PM
Very nice one. Congrats for the win.
Selfa Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 12:10 AM
Congratulations Lei on your win in the UNITED COLOURS: Yellow Contest! You deserve it! :) -HANS
A   Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 4:24 AM
Nice win
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 2:24 AM
Lei, your entry has the feeling of a metaphor and is beautiful! Congratulations on your win!
Scars Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 4:25 PM
Lei, congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo
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