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In Midst of Magic

As I wander with my boat watching the sunset I don’t feel the depth of ocean anymore Instead I see shining magic for the first time Blue turns to yellow making the whole world so bright

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/6/2016 12:54:00 PM
Very nice one. Congrats for the win.
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Date: 3/6/2016 12:10:00 AM
Congratulations Lei on your win in the UNITED COLOURS: Yellow Contest! You deserve it! :) -HANS
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Date: 3/5/2016 4:24:00 AM
Nice win
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Date: 3/5/2016 2:24:00 AM
Lei, your entry has the feeling of a metaphor and is beautiful! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 3/4/2016 4:25:00 PM
Lei, congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo
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