Jenna Logan Poet Rhyme

In Merciful Hearts

In merciful hearts kindness flows
like sweet scents in gardens
Compassionate gates never close
to those who seek pardons

Everyone makes mistakes
Causing grief and heartaches
But kindness heals the breaks

Benevolence starts
In merciful hearts


January 27, 2022
Quietus (Jan 2022 edition) Contest
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Paula Goldsmith February 25, 2022 at 10:36 AM Congratulations on your win. "In Merciful Hearts" is a beautiful write. Have a great/blessed day..................

Andrea Dietrich February 22, 2022 at 3:38 PM This is a really wonderful message and I appreciate your effort to use metaphors, making it all the better. big congrats, Jenna.

John Watt February 21, 2022 at 11:36 PM Jenna, congrats for your win with this excellent Quietus. These are wise words and a message I wish everyone could hear and heed.

Unseeking Seeker February 20, 2022 at 4:51 AM Thank you for participating … congrats on your win, hope you enjoyed the Quietus form!

Lindsay Laurie February 7, 2022 at 4:12 PM Hello Jenna ... being merciful is a great personal gift indeed. If we don't make mistakes, we don't make anything - thank you Jenna - Lindsay

Mark Koplin February 1, 2022 at 5:37 PM Beautiful and heartfelt! Love it!! Jenna Logan February 1, 2022 at 6:28 PM Thanks so very much, Mark.

Edward Ibeh January 30, 2022 at 3:13 PM Such a beautiful poem, Jenna:-) You've done proud the form's inventor, I'm quite sure. Rock on! Jenna Logan January 30, 2022 at 5:37 PM Hi Edward, and I truly value your comments. Thank you.

Susan Lawrence January 29, 2022 at 8:25 AM Jenna, So much beauty here in your words. They come straight from your heart . A gift you have my friend. I love Compassionate gates never close to those who seek pardons … A reflection of you soul. Big hugs, Susan :) Jenna Logan January 30, 2022 at 5:35 PM Thank you, Susan. The kindness of your thoughts humbles my heart.

Mike Gentile January 28, 2022 at 8:41 AM Such a great theme and take on the contest Jenna! I love every word but mist especially, the last stanza! Just sweet and beautiful! Happy Friday xxoo Jenna Logan January 28, 2022 at 3:11 PM I’m so pleased to read your great comments. Thanks, Mike.

Sam Kauffman January 27, 2022 at 11:15 AM Jenna, you have written this from your own merciful, perceptive, heart. Best of all wishes for the contest. Blessings to you. Jenna Logan January 27, 2022 at 3:11 PM Thanks so much for reading me. I appreciate your remarks.

David Kavanagh January 27, 2022 at 11:04 AM Compassion personified here Jenna, I do try to be open and brutally honest, but I fall way short of this marker, excellent poem I have a feeling will do great in the contest, cheers David Jenna Logan January 27, 2022 at 3:10 PM Hi David. Thank you for your kind thoughts and comments.

L Milton Hankins January 27, 2022 at 8:49 AM You are showing your own way here, Jenna, to be merciful and forgiving towards others. Good quality. Good writing. I wish you the best in the contest. Jenna Logan January 27, 2022 at 9:32 AM Thank you for your kind remarks, Milt. I graciously appreciate them.

Tom Cunningham January 27, 2022 at 8:29 AM Only someone with a merciful heart could write what you have written Jenna. Good luck in the contest, hope you are having a good day. Tom Jenna Logan January 27, 2022 at 8:43 AM Oh, dear Tom. You are always so kind in your commenting, but I treasure this one from you the most. I am trying my best to have good days. Stay healthy and happy.