Butterfly Mantra Poet Fibonacci

In Memory

Bright 
Sun 
Shining
Birds chirping
I swallow hard and
Raise my glass up to honor you
You left this world too soon, my heart is left chasing you
	

In loving memory of A.A.S.
3-13-15
Fibonacci
For poetry contest Sponsor rob carmack

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Poet Destroyer A March 20, 2015 at 10:51 PM BUTTERFLY, Congratulations on your awesome Fibonacci win :):):) Luv ~LINDA~

Kim Merryman March 17, 2015 at 5:09 PM I knew this one was a winner! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim Butterfly Mantra March 17, 2015 at 9:07 PM Oops, don't know why there r question marks there, supposed to be :) lol. Have a great night and thanks again :) Butterfly Mantra March 17, 2015 at 9:06 PM Thank You??

Debbie Guzzi March 17, 2015 at 8:48 AM God the eternal source of all poetry. Congratulations on your win. Light & Love

Sara Kendrick March 16, 2015 at 2:21 PM I can feel the emotion in this one..Congrats on your win..Sara

Casarah Nance March 16, 2015 at 8:32 AM What a nice write. the last line-emotional-very many grats on your win.

Skat A March 15, 2015 at 11:51 PM BUTTERFLY, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Fibonacci WIN! ~SKAT

Skat A March 15, 2015 at 3:38 PM Hello Butterfly, this is a heartfelt poem... SKAT

Eve Roper March 15, 2015 at 10:34 AM Congratulations on your win, marvelous poem and a 7

Butterfly Mantra March 15, 2015 at 7:47 AM Wow, thank you all for your kind, encouraging words. This was written about my friend who passed 16 yrs ago, when she was 17 due to complications with pre-eclampsia, I was so heart broken. Her death was sad and shocking, but her friendship lives on!! Thank you!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen March 15, 2015 at 7:24 AM Sad to loose a loved one, but delightful to believe in life after earth death. Butterfly Mantra is a beautul poem. Congratulations on your top win in the contest. Big Smiles, Dane Ann Read more at: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/when_wisdom_walks_652911

Paul Callus March 15, 2015 at 7:16 AM This is a lovely poem where the memory of a loved one is still so fresh. Congrats on your win!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 15, 2015 at 12:43 AM Great one, takes a sad turn in the end,, well done butterfly! Congrats on big win!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 14, 2015 at 10:56 PM i like the cheeryfirst three lines the last line i didn't expect.. hits hard!! my congratulations!!//olive eloisa

Jan Allison March 14, 2015 at 8:22 PM dropping back with my congrats :-) Hugs jan xx

Rob Carmack March 14, 2015 at 8:16 PM I like how this poem hit me, leaving me wanting it again. Congrats.

Kim Shaw March 14, 2015 at 7:30 PM Congratulations on your win, Butterfly!! Hugs, Kimberly

Jan Allison March 13, 2015 at 7:20 PM beautiful tribute I hope this does well for you in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman March 13, 2015 at 4:34 PM Very moving! Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim