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Bright Sun Shining Birds chirping I swallow hard and Raise my glass up to honor you You left this world too soon, my heart is left chasing you In loving memory of A.A.S. 3-13-15 Fibonacci For poetry contest Sponsor rob carmack

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Date: 3/22/2015 11:29:00 AM
Moving emotional tribute is your winning write, Butterfly Mantra!
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Date: 3/20/2015 10:51:00 PM
BUTTERFLY, Congratulations on your awesome Fibonacci win :):):) Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/17/2015 5:09:00 PM
I knew this one was a winner! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/17/2015 9:07:00 PM
Oops, don't know why there r question marks there, supposed to be :) lol. Have a great night and thanks again :)
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Date: 3/17/2015 9:06:00 PM
Thank You??
Date: 3/17/2015 8:48:00 AM
God the eternal source of all poetry. Congratulations on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 3/16/2015 2:21:00 PM
I can feel the emotion in this one..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 3/16/2015 8:32:00 AM
What a nice write. the last line-emotional-very many grats on your win.
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Date: 3/15/2015 11:51:00 PM
BUTTERFLY, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Fibonacci WIN! ~SKAT
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Date: 3/15/2015 3:38:00 PM
Hello Butterfly, this is a heartfelt poem... SKAT
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Date: 3/15/2015 10:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, marvelous poem and a 7
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Date: 3/15/2015 7:47:00 AM
Wow, thank you all for your kind, encouraging words. This was written about my friend who passed 16 yrs ago, when she was 17 due to complications with pre-eclampsia, I was so heart broken. Her death was sad and shocking, but her friendship lives on!! Thank you!
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Date: 3/15/2015 7:24:00 AM
Sad to loose a loved one, but delightful to believe in life after earth death. Butterfly Mantra is a beautul poem. Congratulations on your top win in the contest. Big Smiles, Dane Ann Read more at: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/when_wisdom_walks_652911
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Date: 3/15/2015 7:16:00 AM
This is a lovely poem where the memory of a loved one is still so fresh. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 3/15/2015 12:43:00 AM
Great one, takes a sad turn in the end,, well done butterfly! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 3/14/2015 10:56:00 PM
i like the cheeryfirst three lines the last line i didn't expect.. hits hard!! my congratulations!!//olive eloisa
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Date: 3/14/2015 8:22:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats :-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/14/2015 8:16:00 PM
I like how this poem hit me, leaving me wanting it again. Congrats.
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Date: 3/14/2015 7:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Butterfly!! Hugs, Kimberly
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Date: 3/14/2015 8:03:00 AM
Wow, Butterfly.. So very beautiful in your brokenness!
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Date: 3/13/2015 7:20:00 PM
beautiful tribute I hope this does well for you in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/13/2015 4:34:00 PM
Very moving! Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim
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