In Lieu of Loving You

Anguished cries in lieu of incoherant whisperings
Ambiguous foundations crack beneath our feet
Force eyes closed, hopes and dreams, glittering
Blood shed and battle cries, exhibit my defeat

Clawed hands quarry to grasp a new-found stranger
Twisted features unrecognisable upon a face
That so freely loved and laughed, void of dangers
Now a monster, a miscreation who feeds from disgrace

Distorting ecstacy into the soddenest seasons
Publically perform for all this mental masquerade
Vindicated, exculpated, for a million and one wrong reasons
Formulate liberation, then surrender, I'm afraid.

Where are you now, miss you, where did you go?
Pursuing lugubrious memories for familiarity
Chasing pipedreams from shadows, give them a blow
Repudiate your oppresive abuse, reclaim my sanity 


23rd August 2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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September 28, 2011 at 8:53 AM
Dear Jodie, ( again ) * here is another contest I did not congratulate..., stopping by AGAIN to give warm congratulations on my old contest. Sorry, I forgot to leave you a thank you *comment* of appreciation~ I hope you don't mind my copy paste congratulations.. Don't worry I have read this many times. lol. or how else would have I closed it with out reading. Can you accept my apology and old congrats on your poem. .p.d. the late bloomer
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September 21, 2011 at 3:14 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest of P.D. "Your (OWN) Favorite Poem" Jodie. Love, Carol
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September 20, 2011 at 7:10 PM
Congrats Jodie on a special win with this favorite poem so awesome luv...
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September 20, 2011 at 12:48 PM
Congratultions on the win in the contest of P.D., Jodie
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September 20, 2011 at 11:52 AM
Well written. Well done. Congratulations
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