In Laws

IN-LAWS

Your parents long gone,
many in-laws fill space with joy.
Some take more than give.

By John Trusty

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John Freeman

June 8, 2011 at 8:19 PM

John, good to see you in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 8, 2011 at 10:20 AM

Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest John. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

June 6, 2011 at 9:03 PM

so true, John. And congrats on your win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 6, 2011 at 3:55 PM

congrats John on an excellent win in Dr. Ram's contest with this exciting entry my friend.. enjoy with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 6, 2011 at 3:22 PM

Congratulations on the ninth place win in my contest, John

Gwendolen Song

May 20, 2011 at 2:57 PM

Oh so true your write is. I have met both types of in-laws. I am blessed to have the great kind. Best to you and your writing. Gwendolen

Carolyn Devonshire

May 20, 2011 at 1:57 PM

You nailed it, John! Many times in-laws are so welcome when your own parents have died. Great twist in the last line! Best wishes in Dr. Ram's contest. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

May 20, 2011 at 1:37 PM

Hahah, thanks for your entry, John

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 20, 2011 at 12:50 PM

Thank you for sharing your special poetry with us JT. Have a wonderful weekend and may you find inspiration to continue your writing along the way. Love, Carol

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