Cory Long Poet Senryu

In Laws

In laws can be hard,
my in laws live down the street.
When something goes wrong.

My in laws appear,
Constantly in my business.
Wish they would leave us alone.

I love my in laws.
sometimes they are just too much.
Everyone needs to find their way.



Dr Rams In Laws contest
cory long

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John Freeman June 8, 2011 at 8:19 PM Cory, good to see you in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown June 8, 2011 at 10:19 AM Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest Cory. Love, Carol

Jack Horne June 7, 2011 at 12:09 PM Many congrats : )

Andrea Dietrich June 6, 2011 at 9:02 PM good poem on your in-laws, Cory. Congrats on the win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 6, 2011 at 3:54 PM congrats cory on another exciting win in Dr. Ram's contest on in laws with this terrific lines luv.. enjoy sweet success once again..getting to S.M. late ..playing catch up with work..oh..

Dr.Ram Mehta June 6, 2011 at 3:21 PM Congratulations on the win in my contest, Cory

Anne Rutherford May 23, 2011 at 10:32 AM Wonderful look at in laws Cory , for me I wish I still had them. Anne

Wilma Neels May 19, 2011 at 5:23 AM Cory your last line is so true hey, we need to find our own way, it is just difficult for some in laws to grasp.. All the best for Dr. Ram's contest :)

Matt Hunt May 18, 2011 at 7:32 PM Very true of many in-laws. They sometimes care too much:) R.M.

Andrea Dietrich May 18, 2011 at 1:55 PM cory, your in-laws sound better than mine (if you can believe that, but it's true!) nice set of haiku for this contest.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 18, 2011 at 1:52 PM and needs their own space cory.. this one tells it like it is about in laws.. good luck in the contest my friend... a gem of a write luv..

James Foulk May 18, 2011 at 1:25 PM this was a wonderful piece you wrote cory, good luck in the contest

Dr.Ram Mehta May 18, 2011 at 1:21 PM Thanks for the entry, cory