In Joy

Azure wings spread at
Height…sun aglow in yellow
Delight…ease, light…Joy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Spence Sr Avatar
September 5, 2008 at 9:02 AM
This is wonderful. I like the colors. The piece is very relaxing. Great job! ~Joseph
Foulk Avatar
August 11, 2008 at 11:08 AM
Azure wings spread at, this was a beautiful line, that captures the whole poem. enjoyed it. thank you for reading my seeds hiding and for your comment
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July 18, 2008 at 12:19 PM
I really like the uplifting feel of this poem. Nice use of color and imagery. So much said in these few words. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comments on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen
Sheart Avatar
July 18, 2008 at 10:00 AM
What a beautiful image written from a beautiful heart! May those azure wings keep flying in all that beauty!Truly enjoyed. Missed you hun. Hope you are doing well and that your inspiration is neverending. Many blessings to you. Take care sweet Love Light Truth Patricia
Young Avatar
July 6, 2008 at 8:39 PM
rare haiku. cleverly written always, Gino, 18
Lokken Avatar
June 13, 2008 at 1:51 PM
As always, beautiful and extremely talented. A very well thought haiku that it very creative!! Regards, Sara:)
Stella Avatar
June 13, 2008 at 7:50 AM
this should be painted on a canvas you painted a lovely picture thanks for sharing and for your kindest comments to my work also keep on sharing blessings to you and family
Winter Avatar
June 12, 2008 at 5:22 AM
Wow this made me happy. Simply breathtaking. Love, Shar
Kelly Avatar
June 11, 2008 at 11:22 AM
Big joy TYone, Xcellent Haiku.....
Del Fierro Avatar
June 11, 2008 at 10:29 AM
a light,mystical magical feel you've presented here younglady....it's good to read you again my friend...i was wondering about you Foo Foo :)......peace , jay
Jordan Avatar
June 11, 2008 at 8:00 AM
Farah - this was a wonderful haiku - great use of the form - always your friend who wishes you many blessings and lots of love
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June 11, 2008 at 6:52 AM
What a optimistic view here! You have captured joy in a creative way. Thanks for allowing me to smile with your words. Truly enjoyable! Karen
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