In Joy

Azure wings spread at Height…sun aglow in yellow Delight…ease, light…Joy

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Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 9/5/2008 9:02:00 AM

This is wonderful. I like the colors. The piece is very relaxing. Great job! ~Joseph

James Foulk

Date: 8/11/2008 11:08:00 AM

Azure wings spread at, this was a beautiful line, that captures the whole poem. enjoyed it. thank you for reading my seeds hiding and for your comment

Date: 7/18/2008 12:19:00 PM

I really like the uplifting feel of this poem. Nice use of color and imagery. So much said in these few words. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comments on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen

P Sheart

Date: 7/18/2008 10:00:00 AM

What a beautiful image written from a beautiful heart! May those azure wings keep flying in all that beauty!Truly enjoyed. Missed you hun. Hope you are doing well and that your inspiration is neverending. Many blessings to you. Take care sweet Love Light Truth Patricia

Cayetano Young

Date: 7/6/2008 8:39:00 PM

rare haiku. cleverly written always, Gino, 18

Sara Lokken

Date: 6/13/2008 1:51:00 PM

As always, beautiful and extremely talented. A very well thought haiku that it very creative!! Regards, Sara:)

Katherine Stella

Date: 6/13/2008 7:50:00 AM

this should be painted on a canvas you painted a lovely picture thanks for sharing and for your kindest comments to my work also keep on sharing blessings to you and family

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/12/2008 5:22:00 AM

Wow this made me happy. Simply breathtaking. Love, Shar

Sean Kelly

Date: 6/11/2008 11:22:00 AM

Big joy TYone, Xcellent Haiku.....

Jay Del Fierro

Date: 6/11/2008 10:29:00 AM

a light,mystical magical feel you've presented here younglady....it's good to read you again my friend...i was wondering about you Foo Foo :)......peace , jay

Michael Jordan

Date: 6/11/2008 8:00:00 AM

Farah - this was a wonderful haiku - great use of the form - always your friend who wishes you many blessings and lots of love

Date: 6/11/2008 6:52:00 AM

What a optimistic view here! You have captured joy in a creative way. Thanks for allowing me to smile with your words. Truly enjoyable! Karen