Panagiota Romios Poet Senryu

In Honor of Birds

        Big white bird feathers 
        On Indian blanket lie
        Boy looks up....asks why


             August 28, 2020
                  3pm PST

         *capitalization, poet's choice*

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Alkas Poetry August 29, 2020 at 2:16 PM Children question about everything... it is part of their learning, salute alkas Panagiota Romios August 29, 2020 at 5:21 PM Alkas...,and we should, too.)))) we must always have that spark for learning.. Obrigado. Panagiota xx

Tom Cunningham August 29, 2020 at 2:46 AM Children from an early age will question everything in their quest to gain knowledge Tom Panagiota Romios August 29, 2020 at 5:30 AM Goid Morning, Tom Indeed, they do! Thanks, Tom Love, Pangiexx

Caren Krutsinger August 29, 2020 at 12:06 AM I think this is why God gives us feathers, so we will look up. Panagiota Romios August 29, 2020 at 5:28 AM Greetings, Caren, What a salient point! You visionary! Live, Pangiexx

John Watt August 28, 2020 at 10:49 PM A most intriguing write. There is a novel in the last line alone... "boy looks up asks why". I hope you are feeling better today, my friend. God bless you ~ John Panagiota Romios August 29, 2020 at 5:26 AM I am better,...too bad I cannot post the image for it Am with you on the last line.. Thanks for caring. Will answer your baseball questions when I see Eddie. Thank you Great friend, Pangie xx