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In High Spirits

god had a nightcap 
      after creating the earth 
   and moonshine poured forth 


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David Kavanagh

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Christopher Flaherty

October 18, 2021 at 11:25 AM

100% Proof David And maybe the reason he took Sunday off as a rest day. Just incase he had a few to many and woke up with a massive hangover

David Kavanagh

October 18, 2021 at 12:14 PM

Ha ha, brilliant Christopher you found darkness in my moonshine, cheers David

Gershon Wolf

October 11, 2021 at 12:58 PM

Very clever, David. Two thumbs way up for this one... Burp. ~ Gershon

David Kavanagh

October 11, 2021 at 2:11 PM

Thanks Gershon, I think anyone that creates a planet like earth, would be in need of some moonshine, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

October 11, 2021 at 3:27 AM

A well earned drink I'd say David, tried some poteen a few years ago, I nearly took off lol. Tom

David Kavanagh

October 11, 2021 at 4:21 AM

Same here Tom, you can feel it going right down into your boots, a madman's drink, thanks for looking in cheers David

Jenna Logan

October 10, 2021 at 12:45 PM

Quite a clever twist, David. The best Kind of moonshine!

David Kavanagh

October 10, 2021 at 12:56 PM

Thank you Jenna, there was a couple of ways to write this one, moonshine as the name, and finish with high spirits, probably much of a muchness, but you get the idea, cheers David