In High Spirits

god had a nightcap after creating the earth and moonshine poured forth By David Kavanagh

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Christopher Flaherty

Date: 10/18/2021 11:25:00 AM

100% Proof David And maybe the reason he took Sunday off as a rest day. Just incase he had a few to many and woke up with a massive hangover

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/18/2021 12:14:00 PM

Ha ha, brilliant Christopher you found darkness in my moonshine, cheers David

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/11/2021 12:58:00 PM

Very clever, David. Two thumbs way up for this one... Burp. ~ Gershon

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/11/2021 2:11:00 PM

Thanks Gershon, I think anyone that creates a planet like earth, would be in need of some moonshine, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/11/2021 3:27:00 AM

A well earned drink I'd say David, tried some poteen a few years ago, I nearly took off lol. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/11/2021 4:21:00 AM

Same here Tom, you can feel it going right down into your boots, a madman's drink, thanks for looking in cheers David

Jenna Logan

Date: 10/10/2021 12:45:00 PM

Quite a clever twist, David. The best Kind of moonshine!

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/10/2021 12:56:00 PM

Thank you Jenna, there was a couple of ways to write this one, moonshine as the name, and finish with high spirits, probably much of a muchness, but you get the idea, cheers David

Jan Allison

Date: 10/10/2021 11:29:00 AM

aww this is so gorgeous David:-) hugs jan xx

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/10/2021 12:11:00 PM

Thank you Jan, the alternative name was rocket fuel lol, cheers David