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In Her Skin

she's lost and she's hiding worn from the battle she's fighting never crying but always wishing that there's something big she's missing she is here but feeling hopeless in the mirror she sees an ogress feeling foreign in her own skin in every game she cannot win she's scared and she's shaking while the cold, cruel world is waking she is up- always awake her biggest fear, her worst mistake

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/6/2012 7:34:00 PM
I feel like this sometimes, too... cheer up, J. <3 Wonderfully sad poem =Juli-Michelle=
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Date: 1/31/2012 10:00:00 PM
Sad and beautiful...congrats on your win! Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 1/31/2012 2:18:00 PM
A sad lament laid upon this page. Well written J. Congratulations
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Date: 1/31/2012 1:56:00 PM
excellent flow, it's awful to feel this way yet reading writes like this lets others know they are not alone and that is a tremndous gift you are giving us! Congrad's Light & love
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Date: 1/31/2012 1:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win J. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/31/2012 11:52:00 AM
Congratulations liked it before, well done x
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Date: 1/31/2012 7:45:00 AM
It is exciting to see the replenishment of new poetry here everyday when I log on. I enjoy the diverse poetry so I am never bored by most of what I read. I am happy to have read your poetry this morning J. I hope that you might be able to find the time to read some of the other poetry here also. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/31/2012 1:26:00 AM
Yes this is good x
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Date: 1/30/2012 9:21:00 PM
love this!
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