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In her mind

She walked with her head down and hold up, Years streaming from her face, Music so loud in her ears she can't hear the world go bye Her safe place, her comfort zone, just upon her feet, She looks out across the glass like water, Nothing but a reflection not of her but the light of the moon, Her lip quivers and body goes numb, Feeling lifeless but just so full of it Hoping for a reason not to She pull a herself up and over the railing, Feet steady on the other side Hands gripped tight to her last minute of life No longer looking out with tears in her eyes But down with light in her eyes, She whispers into the cold night I tried I failed I'm sorry

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Date: 11/18/2017 12:14:00 PM
Such a sad first post, never let anyone bring you down like this... I hope you are ok.. Welcome to poetry soup..
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Amber Dowling
Date: 11/20/2017 10:52:00 PM
Thank you and yes I'm good! Thank you