In Her Mind

She walked with her head down and hold up,
Years streaming from her face,
Music so loud in her ears she can't hear the world go bye

Her safe place, her comfort zone, just upon her feet,
She looks out across the glass like water,
Nothing but a reflection not of her but the light of the moon,

Her lip quivers and body goes numb,
Feeling lifeless but just so full of it
Hoping for a reason not to

She pull a herself up and over the railing,
Feet steady on the other side
Hands gripped tight to her last minute of life

No longer looking out with tears in her eyes
But down with light in her eyes,
She whispers into the cold night 

I tried 
I failed
I'm sorry
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Agustin Avatar
October 15, 2024 at 7:12 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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November 18, 2017 at 12:14 PM
Such a sad first post, never let anyone bring you down like this... I hope you are ok.. Welcome to poetry soup..
Dowling Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 10:52 PM
Thank you and yes I'm good! Thank you
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