In Freedom

I already feel the summer breeze,
I already feel the burning sand.
Somehow this reminds me of the time
when my soul was glowing and grand.
This perfect feeling slipped from my hand,
but as long as I feel the air so bland
I will never let myself down
and my wings will always expand.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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March 26, 2016 at 10:12 AM
The imagery is beautiful, Victoria.... a 7... Linda
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February 3, 2016 at 6:36 PM
Spring is in the air, which seems to bring out the beauty in everything. Love the poem, Victoria.
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February 4, 2016 at 2:43 AM
Thank you!:)
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