Debra Falgout Poet Couplet

In Dreams

In Dreams


Family reunion, can't get enough
Chillin' and talkin' about all kinds of stuff

Homemade ice cream taste so good
Want to eat it all day, if I could I would

We laugh and talk about old times
Relaxing and sipping on our favorite wines

My brother in law says I have a gift for you
It is a ring all shiny and new

I tell him I will cherish it and clinch the ring real tight
I know I am waking up from my dream tonight

My brother in law visited me from the beyond
A gift I will treasure, our family bond


Contest by: Francine Roberts
September 22, 2012

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Andrea Dietrich October 4, 2012 at 2:05 PM I'd love to see a poem about this visit from your brother in law. that sounds SO interesting!! Good luck in her contest, Debra.

Apoorva Patrikar September 30, 2012 at 12:55 AM wonderful lines :)

Gordon Mcconnell September 23, 2012 at 3:15 PM A lovely poem, Debra. Extremely well written and very enjoyable. Bless you, Gordon Debra Falgout September 24, 2012 at 9:35 PM Thank you very much Gordaon, glad you enjoyed, have a great evening, peace,debra

Anne-Lise Andresen September 22, 2012 at 3:32 PM Family is the most important thing in our lives Debra. Love it!! Have a lovely weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise :) Debra Falgout September 24, 2012 at 9:36 PM Very much so Anne Lise, thanks, love debra