In Dreams

In Dreams[ a stream-of- consciousness]




I wish the nights could be longer

 and my eyes could watch your blue tranquil  eyes

I cling to your verses and cuddle with your art

For I crave for your one beautiful heart !

In my desperate anxieties While retiring to my bed

I dreamed of those hours and the love that  we made .

When love over powers the filthy desires

And lust is transformed into a karmic world

I think of you in my lonely hours

as I break into your world of dreams

And i hold my breath with this ever fleeting time



just wrote in one shot for the special one !!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/11/2016 12:41:00 PM
Wow very romantic, Smriti! "I cling to your verses and cuddle with your art" is so lovely! He gifted you with heartfelt inspiration. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 3/11/2016 8:52:00 PM
YES.. he did! My heart knows all the truth... Love is such a beautiful feeling but eventually it gives you immeasurable pain... ( I love this painful plight too)
Date: 12/4/2011 9:09:00 PM
just revisiting an old friend and poem,,,whats up woman,,,how have you been....
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Date: 5/27/2011 9:07:00 PM
Smriti, the break is beauty and beyond the best invasion ever... great poem,... p.d.
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Date: 5/24/2011 4:25:00 AM
you are a sun ray of hope, in a dark world, this was amazing, it held me captive and would not let me go....
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Date: 5/23/2011 4:07:00 PM
reminds me of someone thanks for this one
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Date: 5/23/2011 3:57:00 PM
Great emotional poetry i say hold em close , escape no way:) good on ya mate Don
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Date: 5/23/2011 7:20:00 AM
I have something to say on this, but it must be said in a private discourse.
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Date: 5/22/2011 9:04:00 PM
Good write. I find myself once again liking your words of romance.
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Date: 5/22/2011 6:03:00 PM
Thank you for all your comments they are most valued. This is an exceptionally beautiful poem and I wish I had the talent you have.
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Date: 5/22/2011 2:48:00 PM
And i hold my breath with this ever fleeting time.. I love this bit, lovely poem from the heart :@)
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Date: 5/22/2011 2:27:00 PM
Smriti this is truly romantic and so beautiful ..the transitions in every line .. the karmic world reference is key to this piece ..enjoyed luv..
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Date: 5/22/2011 2:10:00 PM
OMG!Such a melting in your arms poem.I'm sure that your special person in your life would love this as I loved reading it.Very Nice....Sincerely,Kacey
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Date: 5/22/2011 2:04:00 PM
a very passionate poem, you have such a great way of expression, it is a true art woman....
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Date: 5/22/2011 1:57:00 PM
very lovely and passionate write on the special one, smriti
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