Red Fiery Poet Romanticism

In Dreams

In Dreams[ a stream-of- consciousness]




I wish the nights could be longer

 and my eyes could watch your blue tranquil  eyes

I cling to your verses and cuddle with your art

For I crave for your one beautiful heart !

In my desperate anxieties While retiring to my bed

I dreamed of those hours and the love that  we made .

When love over powers the filthy desires

And lust is transformed into a karmic world

I think of you in my lonely hours

as I break into your world of dreams

And i hold my breath with this ever fleeting time



just wrote in one shot for the special one !!

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Paul Callus March 11, 2016 at 12:41 PM Wow very romantic, Smriti! "I cling to your verses and cuddle with your art" is so lovely! He gifted you with heartfelt inspiration. ~ Regards // paul Red Fiery March 11, 2016 at 8:52 PM YES.. he did! My heart knows all the truth... Love is such a beautiful feeling but eventually it gives you immeasurable pain... ( I love this painful plight too)

John Aaron Green December 4, 2011 at 9:09 PM just revisiting an old friend and poem,,,whats up woman,,,how have you been....

Poet Destroyer A May 27, 2011 at 9:07 PM Smriti, the break is beauty and beyond the best invasion ever... great poem,... p.d.

John Aaron Green May 24, 2011 at 4:25 AM you are a sun ray of hope, in a dark world, this was amazing, it held me captive and would not let me go....

John Castro May 23, 2011 at 4:07 PM reminds me of someone thanks for this one

Don Johnson May 23, 2011 at 3:57 PM Great emotional poetry i say hold em close , escape no way:) good on ya mate Don

Michael Wayne May 23, 2011 at 7:20 AM I have something to say on this, but it must be said in a private discourse.

Anthony O. Mitchell Jr. May 22, 2011 at 9:04 PM Good write. I find myself once again liking your words of romance.

Sidney Hall Mad Poet May 22, 2011 at 6:03 PM Thank you for all your comments they are most valued. This is an exceptionally beautiful poem and I wish I had the talent you have.

Dawn Mclaughlin May 22, 2011 at 2:48 PM And i hold my breath with this ever fleeting time.. I love this bit, lovely poem from the heart :@)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 22, 2011 at 2:27 PM Smriti this is truly romantic and so beautiful ..the transitions in every line .. the karmic world reference is key to this piece ..enjoyed luv..

Kacey Greenlee May 22, 2011 at 2:10 PM OMG!Such a melting in your arms poem.I'm sure that your special person in your life would love this as I loved reading it.Very Nice....Sincerely,Kacey

John Aaron Green May 22, 2011 at 2:04 PM a very passionate poem, you have such a great way of expression, it is a true art woman....

Dr.Ram Mehta May 22, 2011 at 1:57 PM very lovely and passionate write on the special one, smriti