In Dream

Blue bells swayed, I felt no breeze, as I walked, I walked. It was in dream but the aroma, oh, so familiar. Then a moment, just as time, I swam through clouds. I tried to run but leaded feet kept me at heel.

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John Rhinem

Date: 12/21/2008 10:52:00 AM

"Bue bells swayed~I swam through clouds"~Amazing creativity here dear lady~so very wonderful and genuine!"~"Hello Precious & Beautiful Ann Anderson!"&what a very lovely write here dear! Is shows the purity of your tender heart~and "Your" true ability, as a gifted writer "Yourself!"~I hope your holidays are being showered with beauties for "You" dear!~And, "My Love & Warmth To 'You' Always, John!"~"Merry Christmas!"~Bye Dear:)

Lisa Cooper

Date: 12/12/2008 11:21:00 AM

nice pen.