In Depth of Snow

The depth, the depth,    the depth of snow

up to my ankles
      up to my knees
            up to my elbows
                        buries me

like the abominable,   the abominable snowman

I charge, I charge from the bank

kids scream
        dogs bark
           adults roll their eyes

onto sleds, onto sleds

go their eyes
     go their barks
          go their screams

Their screams,      their screams

on a snow-scented day
            on powdery foray
                     a time to play

In depth, in depth,       in depth of snow

     away
          we
              go

10/26/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 10/29/2020 4:15:00 AM
Those shrieks of delight from children is why I best like snow! Thank you for this terrific reminder.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2020 5:36:00 AM
I really had fun writing this one!
Date: 10/27/2020 1:09:00 PM
Love playing in the snow, your poem brought back happy memories, enjoyed your poem and style, Emilia : )
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/27/2020 2:19:00 PM
I’m so glad, Emilia!
Date: 10/27/2020 12:28:00 AM
That is certainly original poetry. Loved it. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/27/2020 4:11:00 AM
Thanks so much! Hugs...throwing a snowball at my Malta friend ;) all in fun
Date: 10/26/2020 8:37:00 PM
I like the way you rendered this verse Kim, Very nicely done...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/26/2020 9:01:00 PM
Thank you! A different one for me :)
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