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In Death

to say goodbye...as one is laid to rest remember the life their smile the person they were.... then your life, all your problems seem so small compared to this more or less you can see in others what they are thinking life's to short, you need to not take it for granted, should of, could of, would of, you get so caught up in today's world you forget...the day are shrinking it takes death for you to take a moment and breath to hold your loved ones to talk to the ones you don't talk with to forgive for get to smell the roses and just be even to realize maybe your not living at all no regrets, show your love, smile, breath, know...you make you you can live in rage, in pain, in remorse, gilt, happy , sad, behind a your wall, but is it living...if you were to die today is there some thing to be said some thing you wanted to do live the way you truly deserve to live to be humbled, grateful, and happy always as you lay in your bed this is your journey, your path, the road you chose place no blame on those who tress past before you or on the cards you were dealt give, cherish, love, remember, forgive, smile, and be the REAL you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/6/2010 1:03:00 PM
An excellent reminisce Michael and death does this ..makes us think about life now.. and how it affects us eventually as we all progress toward the finality of death..luv.. enjoyed your creativity tonight..
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Date: 9/6/2010 8:16:00 AM
Well expressed thoughts on death, michael
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