In Control

...for Stephanie

 
My meaning is mistaken
and your offense is taken
so in defense you quarantine your soul,
and safe inside you set
your screens for self-protection
so you're always in control.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 26, 2009 at 7:17 AM
Very provocative, Keith! It seems Stephanie is one of those sensitive souls who misconstrues words and enacts defense mechanisms. She may not let anything hurt her, but she may also be unable to let love inside the protective "screen" she has erected around her heart. This is an insightful poem, Keith. Maybe you can help Stephanie break down the barriers.
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March 24, 2009 at 10:15 AM
Dear Keith, So often a man's meaning is not understood and a Do not disturb sign hangs on the doorknob: Does one knock or walk away Great Write Always...HG
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