Marvin G. Celestial Poet Haiku

In Comma

Peaceful and relax
At rest but traverse freely
Altered consciousness

Will to access all
Suddenly achieve by thoughts
Radiating oneness

Empathy ignites
As parameters extend
Embrace love without.

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Gabby Sabre April 8, 2014 at 2:35 AM Impressive way to interpret life's pause. Much enjoyed! Marvin G. Celestial April 8, 2014 at 4:25 AM Great thanks Gabby!

Verlena S. Walker February 26, 2014 at 7:39 PM Well done Marvin... Verlena Marvin G. Celestial February 26, 2014 at 8:05 PM Thank you Verlena!

Verlena S. Walker February 26, 2014 at 7:24 PM Such in depth thoughts of a comma, have you experience one Marvin? Enjoyed reading... Verlena Marvin G. Celestial February 26, 2014 at 7:38 PM I didnt experience it physically but left my body how many times while conscious. The feelings are the same with comma. I have a friend who has a son died after a month of comma. I channelled his thoughts in this piece.

Nette Onclaud February 14, 2014 at 1:30 PM blending in unison, marvin... a string of 'kus well endowed... mabuhay ang pinoy!.. huggs Marvin G. Celestial February 14, 2014 at 6:38 PM Thanks Nette! Mabuhay!

Anne-Lise Andresen February 4, 2014 at 11:22 AM - Touching and sad - great written, Marvin ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Marvin G. Celestial February 4, 2014 at 12:15 PM Yes anne-lise! Sad to lose a friend 1 month of comma.