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In Comma

Peaceful and relax At rest but traverse freely Altered consciousness Will to access all Suddenly achieve by thoughts Radiating oneness Empathy ignites As parameters extend Embrace love without.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/8/2014 2:35:00 AM
Impressive way to interpret life's pause. Much enjoyed!
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marvin celestial
Date: 4/8/2014 4:25:00 AM
Great thanks Gabby!
Date: 2/26/2014 7:39:00 PM
Well done Marvin... Verlena
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marvin celestial
Date: 2/26/2014 8:05:00 PM
Thank you Verlena!
Date: 2/26/2014 7:24:00 PM
Such in depth thoughts of a comma, have you experience one Marvin? Enjoyed reading... Verlena
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Date: 2/26/2014 7:38:00 PM
I didnt experience it physically but left my body how many times while conscious. The feelings are the same with comma. I have a friend who has a son died after a month of comma. I channelled his thoughts in this piece.
Date: 2/14/2014 1:30:00 PM
blending in unison, marvin... a string of 'kus well endowed... mabuhay ang pinoy!.. huggs
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marvin celestial
Date: 2/14/2014 6:38:00 PM
Thanks Nette! Mabuhay!
Date: 2/4/2014 11:22:00 AM
- Touching and sad - great written, Marvin ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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marvin celestial
Date: 2/4/2014 12:15:00 PM
Yes anne-lise! Sad to lose a friend 1 month of comma.