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In Certain Days

When you feel sad,
without flame, without desire
with nothing ...?
Don't go walking around
desperate...
Don't go out for
there blaspheming ...
Go to the park ...
become yourself a boy,or girl
dress up child!
stand your hopes up ...
Watch the clouds
cotton ,candy ...
smell the sweet of
chocolate churro ...
feel the hot wave
of the corn pot
cooked...
watch the carousel
follow your spin with
the head ... buy
the ticket goes up,
cheer up ... leave your
head spinning ... laugh,
have fun, be
again child ...
let the  joyful wave 
catch you ... stay
a little ridiculous!
alive !
Many will applaud you:
the elders,
the most timid,
the serious,
the roses.
the carnations ...
venture ,risk in fishing,
fish awkwardly ...
throw rings ... miss them all
lose some money,
gain joy ...
just have fun,
be infected ..
Look at the ferris wheel ...
go up, contemplate
the life from above ...
the world up there ...
life is down there ...
the world is little,
you are giant...
be courageous climb
the roller coaster ...
Who is brave now?
Who lives life?
you...
discover yourself, be
able to be jovial ...
Everyone will love
share this happiness,
the joy, the life
yourself ... everyone  will feel
pleasure to love you, be
loved by yourself ...
 Do not maintain secrecy ...!



   Suggested song carrusel del furo juan manuel serrat

           https://youtu.be/teryQmN7QAU

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Date: 9/6/2020 12:30:00 PM
Hello Alakas Poetry, this poem is a song! Thes words are beautiful. These words makes sense. The Ferris Wheel my favourite ride in the amusement park. I like to be on the top looking down. Salute Darlene xxxx-oooo My dear friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/7/2020 10:58:00 AM
Hello Alakas, this is a song of Juan Manuel! well you did well in writing this poem. Self experience to? Thank you Alakas. Salute Darlene xxxx-oooo.My dear friend.
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Alkas Poetry
Date: 9/6/2020 4:02:00 PM
I confess that the song of Juan Manuel Serrat inspired me to write this poem... part is song and part is self experience and my won art...I am very glad that you identified yourself with the poem... it is grateful ! xxxxoooo salute my dearest, alkas

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