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In Certain Days

When you feel sad, without flame, without desire with nothing ...? Don't go walking around desperate... Don't go out for there blaspheming ... Go to the park ... become yourself a boy,or girl dress up child! stand your hopes up ... Watch the clouds cotton ,candy ... smell the sweet of chocolate churro ... feel the hot wave of the corn pot cooked... watch the carousel follow your spin with the head ... buy the ticket goes up, cheer up ... leave your head spinning ... laugh, have fun, be again child ... let the joyful wave catch you ... stay a little ridiculous! alive ! Many will applaud you: the elders, the most timid, the serious, the roses. the carnations ... venture ,risk in fishing, fish awkwardly ... throw rings ... miss them all lose some money, gain joy ... just have fun, be infected .. Look at the ferris wheel ... go up, contemplate the life from above ... the world up there ... life is down there ... the world is little, you are giant... be courageous climb the roller coaster ... Who is brave now? Who lives life? you... discover yourself, be able to be jovial ... Everyone will love share this happiness, the joy, the life yourself ... everyone will feel pleasure to love you, be loved by yourself ... Do not maintain secrecy ...! Suggested song carrusel del furo juan manuel serrat https://youtu.be/teryQmN7QAU

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Date: 9/6/2020 12:30:00 PM
Hello Alakas Poetry, this poem is a song! Thes words are beautiful. These words makes sense. The Ferris Wheel my favourite ride in the amusement park. I like to be on the top looking down. Salute Darlene xxxx-oooo My dear friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/7/2020 10:58:00 AM
Hello Alakas, this is a song of Juan Manuel! well you did well in writing this poem. Self experience to? Thank you Alakas. Salute Darlene xxxx-oooo.My dear friend.
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Alkas Poetry
Date: 9/6/2020 4:02:00 PM
I confess that the song of Juan Manuel Serrat inspired me to write this poem... part is song and part is self experience and my won art...I am very glad that you identified yourself with the poem... it is grateful ! xxxxoooo salute my dearest, alkas

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