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In Celestial Limbo

I Into the void my eye peeks, N Never faltering from it’s path. C Cosmic dust E Exudes etheric bliss, as I float L Listlessly, into quantum bliss. E Each soul is pure energy; S Suspended in space in a T Timeless realm I Intrigued by A Astrological myths among the stars, L Longing to stay forever among them. L Life here among the planets I Is true euphoria; I am one with the all; M Many-particles, energy B Blending, bonding, with the all, the O One. 8-21-19 "Pick A Title, Vol 8 - Acrostic - Poetry Contest" Edward Ibeh

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/10/2019 1:30:00 PM

Congratulations on your deserving win that is a top winner for me that I faved. xxoo

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/11/2019 1:48:00 PM

Thanks I am glad you enjoyed it.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/7/2019 10:11:00 PM

Beautiful. Congrats. Blessings and all my best

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/9/2019 9:38:00 AM

Thanks so much.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 9/7/2019 12:21:00 PM

A terrific poem with strikingly vivid imagery, M.L.:-) Congratulations on your win in my contest!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/9/2019 9:39:00 AM

Thank you for running it, Edward. I enjoyed it.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/25/2019 7:21:00 AM

"Each soul is pure energy; Suspended in space in a Timeless realm" - so cosmically and mercurial and correctly penned, my friend!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/27/2019 12:47:00 AM

Glad you liked it; thanks much.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 8/24/2019 3:42:00 AM

Wow I admire this intellectual brilliant muse, your stellar inking is sublime. Life is true euphoria, very true, afterlife is eternal life. Kudos for this great poem. Pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/27/2019 12:48:00 AM

Thank you.

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/23/2019 9:48:00 PM

acrostics often seem forced in my opinion but this one rolls right along, very well crafted beautiful journey through your words...i think it will do well in the contest...:) hugs

M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/27/2019 12:48:00 AM

Oh good, I don't think I do them well but would like to; that's encouraging. Thanks so much.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/23/2019 10:02:00 AM

This is how to write a Acrostic. Well done.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/27/2019 12:48:00 AM

Thanks so much Richard.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2019 7:33:00 PM

another wow from me , in addition to Connie's . You did excellently with the phrase you used for the contest!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/27/2019 12:49:00 AM

Wow, thank you; I'm glad.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/22/2019 2:45:00 PM

Wow M.L. I loved your blissful entry! My imagination soared with you in this heavenly piece. Best for a win. This gem is going into my Faves! : ) xxoo

M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/27/2019 12:49:00 AM

Wow, thanks so much; I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/21/2019 4:54:00 PM

Nice mystical work here! Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/22/2019 1:40:00 PM

Thanks so much, Matthew.