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In Celestial Limbo

I  Into the void my eye peeks,
N  Never faltering from it’s path.

C  Cosmic dust
E  Exudes etheric bliss, as I float
L  Listlessly, into quantum bliss.
E  Each soul is pure energy;
S  Suspended in space in a
T  Timeless realm
I  Intrigued by
A  Astrological myths among the stars,
L  Longing to stay forever among them.

L  Life here among the planets
I  Is true euphoria; I am one with the all;
M  Many-particles, energy 
B  Blending, bonding, with the all, the
O  One.


8-21-19
"Pick A Title, Vol 8 - Acrostic - Poetry Contest"
Edward Ibeh

Copyright © M. L. Kiser | Year Posted 2019

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Connie Marcum Wong Date: 9/10/2019 1:30:00 PM Congratulations on your deserving win that is a top winner for me that I faved. xxoo Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 9/11/2019 1:48:00 PM Thanks I am glad you enjoyed it.

Regina Mcintosh Date: 9/7/2019 10:11:00 PM Beautiful. Congrats. Blessings and all my best Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 9/9/2019 9:38:00 AM Thanks so much.

Edward Ibeh Date: 9/7/2019 12:21:00 PM A terrific poem with strikingly vivid imagery, M.L.:-) Congratulations on your win in my contest! Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 9/9/2019 9:39:00 AM Thank you for running it, Edward. I enjoyed it.

Caren Krutsinger Date: 8/25/2019 7:21:00 AM "Each soul is pure energy; Suspended in space in a Timeless realm" - so cosmically and mercurial and correctly penned, my friend! Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 8/27/2019 12:47:00 AM Glad you liked it; thanks much.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri Date: 8/24/2019 3:42:00 AM Wow I admire this intellectual brilliant muse, your stellar inking is sublime. Life is true euphoria, very true, afterlife is eternal life. Kudos for this great poem. Pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too. Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 8/27/2019 12:48:00 AM Thank you.

Sandra Adams Date: 8/23/2019 9:48:00 PM acrostics often seem forced in my opinion but this one rolls right along, very well crafted beautiful journey through your words...i think it will do well in the contest...:) hugs Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 8/27/2019 12:48:00 AM Oh good, I don't think I do them well but would like to; that's encouraging. Thanks so much.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/23/2019 10:02:00 AM This is how to write a Acrostic. Well done. Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 8/27/2019 12:48:00 AM Thanks so much Richard.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/22/2019 7:33:00 PM another wow from me , in addition to Connie's . You did excellently with the phrase you used for the contest! Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 8/27/2019 12:49:00 AM Wow, thank you; I'm glad.

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/22/2019 2:45:00 PM Wow M.L. I loved your blissful entry! My imagination soared with you in this heavenly piece. Best for a win. This gem is going into my Faves! : ) xxoo Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 8/27/2019 12:49:00 AM Wow, thanks so much; I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Matthew Anish Date: 8/21/2019 4:54:00 PM Nice mystical work here! Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 8/22/2019 1:40:00 PM Thanks so much, Matthew.

Vijay Pandit Date: 8/21/2019 2:57:00 PM A delightful celestial journey through your charming words..enjoyed the read, MLK. Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 8/22/2019 1:40:00 PM I'm glad, thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/21/2019 1:35:00 PM - Excellent written ... a feeling of extreme happiness, M.L. :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 8/22/2019 1:41:00 PM Thanks so much.