M. L. Kiser Poet Acrostic

In Celestial Limbo

I  Into the void my eye peeks,
N  Never faltering from it’s path.

C  Cosmic dust
E  Exudes etheric bliss, as I float
L  Listlessly, into quantum bliss.
E  Each soul is pure energy;
S  Suspended in space in a
T  Timeless realm
I  Intrigued by
A  Astrological myths among the stars,
L  Longing to stay forever among them.

L  Life here among the planets
I  Is true euphoria; I am one with the all;
M  Many-particles, energy 
B  Blending, bonding, with the all, the
O  One.


8-21-19
"Pick A Title, Vol 8 - Acrostic - Poetry Contest"
Edward Ibeh

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Connie Marcum Wong September 10, 2019 at 1:30 PM Congratulations on your deserving win that is a top winner for me that I faved. xxoo M. L. Kiser September 11, 2019 at 1:48 PM Thanks I am glad you enjoyed it.

Regina Mcintosh September 7, 2019 at 10:11 PM Beautiful. Congrats. Blessings and all my best M. L. Kiser September 9, 2019 at 9:38 AM Thanks so much.

Edward Ibeh September 7, 2019 at 12:21 PM A terrific poem with strikingly vivid imagery, M.L.:-) Congratulations on your win in my contest! M. L. Kiser September 9, 2019 at 9:39 AM Thank you for running it, Edward. I enjoyed it.

Caren Krutsinger August 25, 2019 at 7:21 AM "Each soul is pure energy; Suspended in space in a Timeless realm" - so cosmically and mercurial and correctly penned, my friend! M. L. Kiser August 27, 2019 at 12:47 AM Glad you liked it; thanks much.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri August 24, 2019 at 3:42 AM Wow I admire this intellectual brilliant muse, your stellar inking is sublime. Life is true euphoria, very true, afterlife is eternal life. Kudos for this great poem. Pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too. M. L. Kiser August 27, 2019 at 12:48 AM Thank you.

Sandra Adams August 23, 2019 at 9:48 PM acrostics often seem forced in my opinion but this one rolls right along, very well crafted beautiful journey through your words...i think it will do well in the contest...:) hugs M. L. Kiser August 27, 2019 at 12:48 AM Oh good, I don't think I do them well but would like to; that's encouraging. Thanks so much.

Richard Lamoureux August 23, 2019 at 10:02 AM This is how to write a Acrostic. Well done. M. L. Kiser August 27, 2019 at 12:48 AM Thanks so much Richard.

Andrea Dietrich August 22, 2019 at 7:33 PM another wow from me , in addition to Connie's . You did excellently with the phrase you used for the contest! M. L. Kiser August 27, 2019 at 12:49 AM Wow, thank you; I'm glad.

Connie Marcum Wong August 22, 2019 at 2:45 PM Wow M.L. I loved your blissful entry! My imagination soared with you in this heavenly piece. Best for a win. This gem is going into my Faves! : ) xxoo M. L. Kiser August 27, 2019 at 12:49 AM Wow, thanks so much; I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Matthew Anish August 21, 2019 at 4:54 PM Nice mystical work here! Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish M. L. Kiser August 22, 2019 at 1:40 PM Thanks so much, Matthew.

Vijay Pandit August 21, 2019 at 2:57 PM A delightful celestial journey through your charming words..enjoyed the read, MLK. M. L. Kiser August 22, 2019 at 1:40 PM I'm glad, thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen August 21, 2019 at 1:35 PM - Excellent written ... a feeling of extreme happiness, M.L. :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) M. L. Kiser August 22, 2019 at 1:41 PM Thanks so much.