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I wrote the quite late in the evening and posted It with a typo, and the feeling it was not really finished Hence the extra words this morning.
In humans narcissity, indifferent continually partly? Caring effacing cursing raving In-continuity..' Maybe? Am I trite? Light entertainment;T V trials expose's Speak of sensuality, tease by promiscuity In a questionable proximity a proxy place An invisible divide.. Presides rabidity This is a worn; worm eaten valuless society That only wants the best for me for you 'so true' A mark a chip broken mugs, cheer for the Equality, women fighting like men, tattoss are A freedom sign? Like the dark aged picts did Twee do now.' 'meow meow' only the best we celebrate Till they are unmasked, by the ones so tasked They are dragged to the courts, where they find Co-horts; in cahoots with the nobility of sleaze above the judicary How can they jail these.? One thing seperates them Unproven acts, un-found out facts Without a shadow of doubt.' Time has the truest shoutout.'

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Date: 11/4/2019 8:59:00 AM
Excellent write. Ann
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Joe Maverick
Date: 2/27/2020 3:12:00 AM
Hi Ann so good of you to stop by; also thank you for the kind comment!
Date: 9/13/2019 3:39:00 PM
Interesting way of saying the truth...
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Joe Maverick
Date: 9/27/2019 10:43:00 AM
Hello Pashang, excuses for not getting back sooner, it is so good of you to comment, things are just meant to be sometimes I have found. I hope all is well there - I will be giving you a look-in at some point.