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In Blue

Hold hero to the brave Which can't admit his broken heart For his desired slave Is his ego he can't depart All of his passion waves Is lust be dust cardinal sin To see if she behaves Amongst abnormal tardent skin Believe being to breathe Within your whispered wailing walls Dare not do I deceive Concerned with not canceling calls Lake meadows of the earth Pour in the pure and potpourri Conceiving streams at birth Forming faint fire we fight to free How shall this thrust of trust be true For me to be your morning blue

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Date: 8/19/2022 5:57:00 PM
Your poem is so beautifully expressed, Johnny, with wonderful use of alliteration and imagery like "Pour in the pure and potpourri" and "Forming faint fire we fight to free" and unique word combinations like "thrust of trust". Evocative poetry! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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