In Between Dreams

In Between Dreams

In between dreams
I work and eat
Count the hours
Until I’m back to sleep
For eight hours a night
You control my mind
Seducing me 
In such short time
Like a puppet
You pull my string
Placing me on a throne
To be king
 
I’m mesmerized
Completely taken
My need for you
Is not mistaken
This fantasy world
 In which I live
Offers that the real life
Can not give
So I’m trapped
In between dreams
Living out a life
Ripped by the seams

Is there no hope
For a guy like me?
That does like the world
In which he sees
Is dreamland 
Really that bad?
When it’s a place
That doesn’t know sad
In between dreams
I try me best
But I long
For a day of rest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/7/2011 8:21:00 PM
very creative and fine piece of poetry.
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Date: 6/7/2011 10:23:00 AM
Nice one, Jeff. Perfect rhythm and rhyme. Smooth writing, my friend. :))
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Date: 6/7/2011 8:59:00 AM
Your poetry is groovy. Excellent! love sophia.
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