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In Between Dreams

In Between Dreams In between dreams I work and eat Count the hours Until I’m back to sleep For eight hours a night You control my mind Seducing me In such short time Like a puppet You pull my string Placing me on a throne To be king I’m mesmerized Completely taken My need for you Is not mistaken This fantasy world In which I live Offers that the real life Can not give So I’m trapped In between dreams Living out a life Ripped by the seams Is there no hope For a guy like me? That does like the world In which he sees Is dreamland Really that bad? When it’s a place That doesn’t know sad In between dreams I try me best But I long For a day of rest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/7/2011 8:21:00 PM
very creative and fine piece of poetry.
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Date: 6/7/2011 10:23:00 AM
Nice one, Jeff. Perfect rhythm and rhyme. Smooth writing, my friend. :))
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Date: 6/7/2011 8:59:00 AM
Your poetry is groovy. Excellent! love sophia.
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