In Awe of the Night

In Awe Of The Night.
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Countless sparkling diamonds twinkle
In a soft dark velveteen nights sky
The bashful milky moon 
Shows it’s luminous face once more
Capturing the receptive surveying eye
How many hearts and minds
Have seen the same stars as I
Since the beginning of time
How many idle dreamers
And lovers swooned beneath the splendor
Of an amorous moon but tonight the stars are mine
As I stand here in admiration 
And in awe
Thankful for the wonders of creation.
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Peter Dome©2020.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dietrich Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 4:46 PM
this is just wonderful, Peter. Great writing!
Dome Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 12:50 AM
Thank you Andrea.You are the talented one. hope you are keeping ok.Love your writes. take care. Pete.
Y. Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 11:17 AM
Hi Peter, Your penned a lovely description of the night sky. I to am in awe of it’s beauty. Well done my friend:-) Alexis
Dome Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 12:52 AM
thank you so much, Alexis.Always so kind and supportive. much appreciated. take care Pete.
Andresen Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 7:28 AM
- Thoughts out into the night ... love it :) ... I do it often, Peter ... impressive, large and infinitely beautiful ... The star images ... The Milky Way .. The moon ... The silence ... The infinite ... WoooW :) -hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dome Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 7:06 AM
Hello dear friend. so good to hear from you again. hope you are well Thank you so much for your kind comments. take care. Best wishes. Pete.
Logan Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 5:51 AM
Your words show great respect and awe for their beauty, bestowed to us by their Creator. Lovely lines, Peter.
Dome Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 7:08 AM
Hi Jenna. Thank you for stopping by. Yes the night sky is wonderful. a gift from the creator for us to enjoy.. Take good care. Pete.
One Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 5:25 AM
How many wonders can one deny.. Love this, the imagery, the slight alliteration and the assonance... Those two of my favorite poetry techniques.
Dome Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 5:27 AM
Thank you, my dear friend. Means so much to me. Much appreciated. take care.
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