Winged Warrior Poet Rhyme

In Another Time

In a time of living loving loud
Where memories made were galactic gold
You're serene smile through a clusterous cloud
And our journey enviously extolled

Oh how I pray to turn back time
To have you in our precious hold
But time turns me like a clocking chime
As the past is left to memorially mould.


July.21.2016
In Another Time - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Ir0nic ZiNk

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Teddy Kimathi August 16, 2016 at 2:48 AM Very deep.... I can relate with this poem.. Congrats ^WW^, for your top placement in the contest!! ;-)

Jan Allison August 14, 2016 at 11:34 AM I felt quite emotional reading your wonderful words especially the final stanza ^WW^ many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx7

Kai Michael Neumann August 13, 2016 at 4:23 AM Congratulations Memorial mould is a strong picture, but also fungus and Penicillin heals through sadness... Good stuff. Winged Warrior August 13, 2016 at 11:31 AM THank you so much Kai...god bless...^WW^

Ironic Zink August 13, 2016 at 12:38 AM Great Job Warrior! Short and sweet and rhymed... Congratulations on your top ten win! Winged Warrior August 13, 2016 at 11:29 AM Thank you Ir0nic...and for having me my friend...it was fun...god bless...^WW^

Alexis Y. August 13, 2016 at 12:30 AM Hi WW, Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis Winged Warrior August 13, 2016 at 11:27 AM Thank you my friend Alexis...god bless...^WW^

Pashang Salehi July 23, 2016 at 2:28 PM Nicely done.. Winged Warrior July 26, 2016 at 1:32 AM Thank you so kindly Pashang...god bless...WW

Sara Kendrick July 22, 2016 at 6:17 PM Enjoyed reading this work..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Winged Warrior July 23, 2016 at 8:28 AM Thanks, Sara my friend...always nice to have you visit...god bless...^WW^

Charlie Smith July 22, 2016 at 11:23 AM Well done WW, I loved it. Best wishes in the contest... Winged Warrior July 22, 2016 at 12:33 PM Thank you Charlie...always nice to hear from you my friend...god bless...^WW^

Andrea Dietrich July 21, 2016 at 6:41 PM good one. I think it would be so nice to be able to return to another time, Winged Warrior. This is a theme I too enjoy writing about. Winged Warrior July 22, 2016 at 5:02 AM Thank you Andrea...time travel just around the corner along with teleportation lol...what a world that would be...^WW^

Tim Smith July 21, 2016 at 12:38 PM Wonderful rhymed verses WW...I like the last line Winged Warrior July 22, 2016 at 4:49 AM Thank you, Tim...god bless...^WW^

Wendy Rycroft July 21, 2016 at 12:31 PM A really good In another time poem well done xx Winged Warrior July 22, 2016 at 4:44 AM Thank you Wendy...for stopping by my friend...god bless...^WW^