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In Another Time

In a time of living loving loud Where memories made were galactic gold You're serene smile through a clusterous cloud And our journey enviously extolled Oh how I pray to turn back time To have you in our precious hold But time turns me like a clocking chime As the past is left to memorially mould. July.21.2016 In Another Time - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Ir0nic ZiNk

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Date: 8/16/2016 2:48:00 AM
Very deep.... I can relate with this poem.. Congrats ^WW^, for your top placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 8/14/2016 11:34:00 AM
I felt quite emotional reading your wonderful words especially the final stanza ^WW^ many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 8/13/2016 4:23:00 AM
Congratulations Memorial mould is a strong picture, but also fungus and Penicillin heals through sadness... Good stuff.
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Date: 8/13/2016 11:31:00 AM
THank you so much Kai...god bless...^WW^
Date: 8/13/2016 12:38:00 AM
Great Job Warrior! Short and sweet and rhymed... Congratulations on your top ten win!
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Date: 8/13/2016 11:29:00 AM
Thank you Ir0nic...and for having me my friend...it was fun...god bless...^WW^
Date: 8/13/2016 12:30:00 AM
Hi WW, Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis
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Date: 8/13/2016 11:27:00 AM
Thank you my friend Alexis...god bless...^WW^
Date: 7/23/2016 2:28:00 PM
Nicely done..
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Date: 7/26/2016 1:32:00 AM
Thank you so kindly Pashang...god bless...WW
Date: 7/22/2016 6:17:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this work..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 7/23/2016 8:28:00 AM
Thanks, Sara my friend...always nice to have you visit...god bless...^WW^
Date: 7/22/2016 11:23:00 AM
Well done WW, I loved it. Best wishes in the contest...
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Date: 7/22/2016 12:33:00 PM
Thank you Charlie...always nice to hear from you my friend...god bless...^WW^
Date: 7/21/2016 6:41:00 PM
good one. I think it would be so nice to be able to return to another time, Winged Warrior. This is a theme I too enjoy writing about.
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Date: 7/22/2016 5:02:00 AM
Thank you Andrea...time travel just around the corner along with teleportation lol...what a world that would be...^WW^
Date: 7/21/2016 12:38:00 PM
Wonderful rhymed verses WW...I like the last line
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Date: 7/22/2016 4:49:00 AM
Thank you, Tim...god bless...^WW^
Date: 7/21/2016 12:31:00 PM
A really good In another time poem well done xx
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Date: 7/22/2016 4:44:00 AM
Thank you Wendy...for stopping by my friend...god bless...^WW^

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