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In Another Time

In another place at another time perhaps, our worlds may collide. We would fall in love and our lives would be as we imagined our "us" when we were teens and thinking of where we would wind up in life and who that special person not known yet would be. I would imagine and contemplate that you were my shining knight that, on horse, took flight to save me from the ogre who grabbed me and held me hostage because he loved me and chose me to be his. You would imagine and contemplate that I was your damsel in distress and I couldn't be saved unless you took the reigns galloped your horse as fast as you could and would save me from my destiny. You were truth and honor I was the virgin of purity together we were a duo of honest, brutal, constant, decency a pair to be noticed and adored not abhorred by the evil who would steal our innocence and kill our as-we-thought undying love of each other. Today, we are dead our legacies, our love for each other and the memories our children share and the care that we designed for our family are their precious heirlooms to always hold dear and near to the heart.

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Date: 7/16/2016 12:13:00 AM
Susanne, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Susanne Bettis
Date: 7/16/2016 7:42:00 AM
Thank you, Linda, for welcoming me to this community. I look forward to reading other's works, as well as posting my own for critiquing. I am receptive to any suggestions a reviewer may make to make a work read better. Thanks, again. God bless and hugs, Susanne
Date: 7/15/2016 5:27:00 PM
Susanne,,, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I feel as if you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*
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Susanne Bettis
Date: 7/16/2016 7:44:00 AM
Thank you, SKAT, for welcoming me to this community. I am looking forward to reading other's works, as well as posting mine for critiquing. Will be reading you once I learn to navigate through this environment. God bless and hugs, Susanne

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