In Adoration

His bright eyes, 
radiant like sun's rays, 
melting my frozen heart with its warmth.

His insights
deep; vast like universe, 
uplifting my dazed mind to it's heights.

His aura, 
unique and magical, 
glowing like a resplendent full moon.

His pure soul, 
a calm and smooth ocean, 
soaking my spirit in its currents.


Date: 02/25/2020
Submitted for: Images in Parallel Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Joseph May
Syllables: 3/6/9; 3/6/9; 3/6/9; 3/6/9
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Seeker Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 10:06 AM
so spiritually uplifting! Congrats on your top win, Anitha!
Daniel Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 2:20 AM
Very beautiful poem, Anitha, congratulations:)
Brul Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 8:49 PM
So beautiful...This majestic poem resonates with me.My kind of poem!!...An instant FAVE!!! Congratulations!!!
Pandit Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 6:41 AM
This is so romantic and beautiful, Ani. A well deserved #1 win. BIG congrats.
Mcintosh Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 6:14 AM
Lovely. Congrats on the top win. God bless you with love, Gina
May Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 5:07 AM
Beautiful write Anitha, Congrats on your win..
Dietrich Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 6:34 PM
wow, you did an amazing job, sweet friend. I thought this contest was such a nice one.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 6:38 AM
You did this so well. I expect it will do well in the contest. Best of luck. ;0)
Jayasankar Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 10:28 AM
Richard thank you so much for the visit and wishes. God bless. :)
Balasubramanian Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 4:42 AM
Your poetry is astounding, way you use metaphors and similes really you are gifted Anitha. Superb entry for the contest. Hope all is well with you. Take care,Rama
Jayasankar Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 10:27 AM
Rama thank you so much dear... Hugs.. Gn :)
Buhagiar Avatar
February 25, 2021 at 11:58 AM
Sensational poetry, Anitha. Loved the contrasts in every stanza.
Jayasankar Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 4:09 AM
Thank you so much Victor. God bless.. :)
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