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In Admiration

In admiration

The starry heaven observed

Too small myself found! 








© Demetrios Trifiatis
     24 January 2018

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Maria Williams

January 25, 2018 at 5:58 AM

What a breathtaking sight, who would not feel humble and small in this vast macrocosm. Great Haiku dearest Demetrios.....Maria xxx

Silent One

January 24, 2018 at 9:27 AM

Great haiku my friend..

Demetrios Trifiatis

January 24, 2018 at 10:03 AM

So kind of you to say this my friend , S.O. Thank you!

Probir Gupta

January 24, 2018 at 7:30 AM

Very rightly said ... Beside the starry heaven, a speck of dust ... but with the potential to understand it till he breathes his last ... nice haiku ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

January 24, 2018 at 10:02 AM

Very true my friend, Probir! Very true! Thank you!

Vijay Pandit

January 24, 2018 at 6:18 AM

The vastness of universe by comparison is breathtaking. We should be humbled to be a tiny part..a potent thought, Demetrios.

Demetrios Trifiatis

January 24, 2018 at 10:02 AM

I am humbled for several decades and will remain so the next few years if nature so decrees my friend, Vijay! Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 24, 2018 at 1:56 AM

- Good morning my friend :) - Yes, we're "only" a little piece in that huge puzzle game ... but important :) - Lovely written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

January 24, 2018 at 4:24 AM

Yes, it is true! We are important in the degree of our understanding and our participation dearest, Anne-Lise! Thank you so very much! Hugsxx

Tom Cunningham

January 24, 2018 at 1:53 AM

There is no better sight than to see stars like diamonds thrown across a black velvet cloth. A sight I witnessed a few years ago. Breathtaking, and yes we are but a grain of sand on a beach. Beautiful words Demetrios. I always enjoy them. Regards Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis

January 24, 2018 at 4:26 AM

Thank you my friend, Tom, for your analytic comment!

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