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In admiration The starry heaven observed Too small myself found! © Demetrios Trifiatis 24 January 2018

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Maria Williams

Date: 1/25/2018 5:58:00 AM

What a breathtaking sight, who would not feel humble and small in this vast macrocosm. Great Haiku dearest Demetrios.....Maria xxx

Silent One

Date: 1/24/2018 9:27:00 AM

Great haiku my friend..

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/24/2018 10:03:00 AM

So kind of you to say this my friend , S.O. Thank you!

Probir Gupta

Date: 1/24/2018 7:30:00 AM

Very rightly said ... Beside the starry heaven, a speck of dust ... but with the potential to understand it till he breathes his last ... nice haiku ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/24/2018 10:02:00 AM

Very true my friend, Probir! Very true! Thank you!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/24/2018 6:18:00 AM

The vastness of universe by comparison is breathtaking. We should be humbled to be a tiny part..a potent thought, Demetrios.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/24/2018 10:02:00 AM

I am humbled for several decades and will remain so the next few years if nature so decrees my friend, Vijay! Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/24/2018 1:56:00 AM

- Good morning my friend :) - Yes, we're "only" a little piece in that huge puzzle game ... but important :) - Lovely written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/24/2018 4:24:00 AM

Yes, it is true! We are important in the degree of our understanding and our participation dearest, Anne-Lise! Thank you so very much! Hugsxx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/24/2018 1:53:00 AM

There is no better sight than to see stars like diamonds thrown across a black velvet cloth. A sight I witnessed a few years ago. Breathtaking, and yes we are but a grain of sand on a beach. Beautiful words Demetrios. I always enjoy them. Regards Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/24/2018 4:26:00 AM

Thank you my friend, Tom, for your analytic comment!