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In a World Where I do not Exist

If there's a world where I do not exist I would want my memories to persist Friends regaling stories of good deeds done People remembering old days of fun Silence serenading in between smiles Familiar fighting with forgotten files No one should shed tears that I am now gone Rather reminisce golden days till dawn Whene'er you think thoughts that throwback to me Close your eyes, take a pause, then let me be

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Date: 9/7/2024 11:05:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write again. You must stay/writing away...Have a blessed/fun day with your win......................
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Date: 9/7/2024 8:06:00 AM
Nice rhymes Jo... We need compassionate people like you to exist.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 9/5/2024 10:23:00 AM
So beautifully expressed, Jo! Wonderful rhyme scheme and even better message expressed in very expressive images - "silence serenading in between smiles." Powerful. And even if you have left us, your words will remain to inspire us! A definite blessing. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings!
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Date: 9/5/2024 8:45:00 AM
WOW!!! I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Great Ending. FAV for me. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a blessed day writing away................
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Date: 9/2/2024 9:15:00 AM
Our body may die, but not our soul. Your happenings will always be remembered by those who care.
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Date: 8/29/2024 1:28:00 PM
Thought provoking verse Joanna, it's hard to think that one day we won't exist in this life but hopefully in the next. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 8/29/2024 11:08:00 AM
Good luck, poet. Glad you do exist. Thanks for sharing.
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