Bl Devnath Poet Monoku

In a Perfect World

a pure fleshy heart 
                                 strong without any disease
                                    covered by chest's sky

                                    filled up with fragrance
                               no any harmful thought's dream
                                        character's loving 

                                        caring feeling hides 
                                     nice environment lighting 
                                         in a perfect world 

                                         if it's perfect sure 
                                  a perfect earthly world's home
                                        not less than heaven 


                          For contest: Sponsored by Catie Lindsey

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Demetrios Trifiatis February 15, 2016 at 3:17 PM A string of beautiful expressions that deserve recognition, dear BL! Good luck! Bl Devnath February 16, 2016 at 8:59 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment and wishes,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen February 15, 2016 at 2:13 PM - Beautiful,dear Bl - Good luck in the contest, I give you a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Bl Devnath February 16, 2016 at 8:58 AM Thanks my lovely lovely friend for wishing me good luck and 7. Loved always,bl