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In a Hotel Room

In a hotel room I lie on my side watching him scramble to find his tie

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Robert Johnson

Date: 3/11/2014 9:42:00 PM

Sure get's the mind spinning don't it. :)

Ralph Mason

Date: 11/19/2013 7:47:00 AM

Iess is more, very nice

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 11/18/2013 11:57:00 PM

Great bit of fun. Nice.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/11/2013 9:34:00 PM

When do I get to read something new from you? I hope it's soon...I wanted to stop by and say thanks for the placement in your last contest. I'm honored to be on your list. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Jack Horne

Date: 11/10/2013 1:20:00 PM

powerful write, Susan : )

Kathryn Collins

Date: 10/19/2013 11:55:00 AM

SuZ - hot mama. love the tie routine. love, Kathy

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 10/4/2013 11:07:00 PM

This leaves much to the imagination. I love it! I have always told you that you are one of my favorite poets. My time away has not changed that. I'm so happy to be back reading your poetry tonight. Love and blessings, Rhonda

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/2/2013 8:45:00 AM

There is a lot to imagine between the lines of this clever poem! Oh, and thanks a bunch for my placement in the grief contest..... I wrote two different poems....couldn't decide which ones you might like...so I'm pleased I entered the right one!! lol !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2013 8:42:00 AM

HI, susan. I never saw this one yet and I like it. It makes me want to know the story behind it. I came here to find out for sure if the cherry blossom contest had been yours, and I discovered that it was. I am so thankful to you for giving that contest. You are the BEST. Luv, Andrea (And thanks, you guys here, for the congratulations!)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/26/2013 10:24:00 AM

Interesting lines penned..Enjoyed reading today..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/26/2013 9:16:00 AM

Soup mail!!!

Jack Horne

Date: 9/22/2013 3:13:00 PM

very clever indeed - so much said there. Thanks very much,Susan - loved your regret contest

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/17/2013 6:53:00 PM

wow, so much is conjured up by this short little poem. nice one!

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/17/2013 9:48:00 AM

Yes...........this tells, without telling!! It is all we need to know !! Well done !! (and ps.......I am so pleased that you enjoyed the poem I entered for your loneilness contest.......thank you so much !! I was hoping to write something different for a change......I'm so glad you liked it......Thank you very much, Susan!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/17/2013 8:58:00 AM

Very few words conveying a lot, Susan