In a Hotel Room

In a hotel room I lie on my side
watching him scramble to find his tie
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Johnson Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 9:42 PM
Sure get's the mind spinning don't it. :)
Mason Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 7:47 AM
Iess is more, very nice
Thirtyseven Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 11:57 PM
Great bit of fun. Nice.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 9:34 PM
When do I get to read something new from you? I hope it's soon...I wanted to stop by and say thanks for the placement in your last contest. I'm honored to be on your list. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Horne Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 1:20 PM
powerful write, Susan : )
Collins Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 11:55 AM
SuZ - hot mama. love the tie routine. love, Kathy
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
October 4, 2013 at 11:07 PM
This leaves much to the imagination. I love it! I have always told you that you are one of my favorite poets. My time away has not changed that. I'm so happy to be back reading your poetry tonight. Love and blessings, Rhonda
Richards Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 8:45 AM
There is a lot to imagine between the lines of this clever poem! Oh, and thanks a bunch for my placement in the grief contest..... I wrote two different poems....couldn't decide which ones you might like...so I'm pleased I entered the right one!! lol !
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2013 at 8:42 AM
HI, susan. I never saw this one yet and I like it. It makes me want to know the story behind it. I came here to find out for sure if the cherry blossom contest had been yours, and I discovered that it was. I am so thankful to you for giving that contest. You are the BEST. Luv, Andrea (And thanks, you guys here, for the congratulations!)
Kendrick Avatar
September 26, 2013 at 10:24 AM
Interesting lines penned..Enjoyed reading today..Sara
Mehta Avatar
September 26, 2013 at 9:16 AM
Soup mail!!!
Horne Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 3:13 PM
very clever indeed - so much said there. Thanks very much,Susan - loved your regret contest
Bauer Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 6:53 PM
wow, so much is conjured up by this short little poem. nice one!
Richards Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 9:48 AM
Yes...........this tells, without telling!! It is all we need to know !! Well done !! (and ps.......I am so pleased that you enjoyed the poem I entered for your loneilness contest.......thank you so much !! I was hoping to write something different for a change......I'm so glad you liked it......Thank you very much, Susan!
Mehta Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 8:58 AM
Very few words conveying a lot, Susan
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