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In a Hotel Room

The ghats,grey serpents in green thickets cool and moist, dampens restless midgets There ,in a hotel ,in the lushness of the tropic's crown are trees mighty tall with neat flights of stairs hanging down. stood perched on trees, a cabin each of uneven logs with wooden planks hand-polished to parqueted floors A large cypress cot,an inviting bed ,the sensuous Umrao-Jaan on canvas overhead, glowing in hues from a crystal pan white porcelain figures, lovers dancing on mantle;love lounges, windows open to wild flora , a few ripe mangoes hanging in bunches On the rails ruddy jasmine vines flaunt little white stars antique bamboo lanterns at the door , happy to be ajar warm aroma from oils of wild-herb toiletries exude wanting a trickle on the heated hearts' pursuit cute candles whispers roses and jasmine in the air nothing more, the imp of the mind feasts on love in the air. on the small balcony , the cool breeze of the underwoods caress In this tree-house,bask in nature...at its best to soothe five senses.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/14/2013 7:43:00 PM
very nice imagery Mehnaz...nice write....
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Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 2/14/2013 11:43:00 PM
thanks Joseph...
Date: 2/14/2013 4:48:00 PM
Now this sounds like a hotel room I would like to stay in
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Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 2/14/2013 11:44:00 PM
Really, it is real fun..
Date: 2/14/2013 3:02:00 PM
Mehnaz a great entree for the contest...David
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Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 2/14/2013 11:45:00 PM
thank you, David..
Date: 2/14/2013 9:55:00 AM
This is such a beautiful and amazing write my friend! I loved reading this delightful poem this morning! What a meaningful piece, Great Work!!
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Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 2/14/2013 11:47:00 PM
thanks Russell
Date: 2/14/2013 7:28:00 AM
A great write on the theme of the contest!Enjoyed the read.Thanks for your inspiring words at my poem.
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Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 2/14/2013 11:46:00 PM
thank you ,Kash
Date: 2/14/2013 7:01:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this creative and descriptive work this morn..If for a contest, reads like winning material to me..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always uplifting..Sara
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Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 2/14/2013 11:47:00 PM
thanks Sara ,for the kind words...
Date: 2/14/2013 6:08:00 AM
My dear, your poem: A sweet caress of a Spring's morning breeze!
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Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 2/14/2013 11:48:00 PM
thank you so much.....
Date: 2/14/2013 4:36:00 AM
I like your suggestion for this contest, Mehnaz. - Very good poem. - Have a wonderful Valentine's day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 2/14/2013 11:49:00 PM
thanks Anne Lise....
Date: 2/14/2013 4:20:00 AM
they say a picture is worth a thousand words..but i think this Piece is worth a thousand pictures....deep write Veetil :-)
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Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 2/14/2013 11:50:00 PM
thank you, I am honored,...
Date: 2/13/2013 11:39:00 PM
this is a very unusual but delightful room and I love the descriptive way you used to write of it.
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Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 2/14/2013 11:43:00 PM
yes ,it is ...it is fun to stay in such a place...

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