In a Hotel Room

The ghats,grey serpents in green thickets
cool and moist, dampens restless midgets

There ,in  a hotel ,in the lushness of the tropic's crown
are trees mighty tall with neat flights of stairs hanging down.

stood  perched on trees, a cabin each of uneven logs
with wooden planks hand-polished to parqueted  floors


A large cypress cot,an inviting bed ,the sensuous Umrao-Jaan
on canvas overhead, glowing in hues from a crystal pan

white porcelain figures, lovers dancing  on mantle;love lounges,
windows open to wild flora , a few ripe mangoes hanging in bunches

On the rails ruddy jasmine vines flaunt little white stars
antique bamboo lanterns at the door , happy to be ajar
 
warm aroma from oils of wild-herb toiletries exude
wanting a trickle on the heated hearts' pursuit

cute candles whispers roses and jasmine in the air
nothing more,  the imp of the mind feasts on love in the air. 

on the small balcony , the cool breeze of the underwoods caress
In this tree-house,bask in nature...at its best to soothe five senses.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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May Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 7:43 PM
very nice imagery Mehnaz...nice write....
Veetil Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 11:43 PM
thanks Joseph...
Jones Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 4:48 PM
Now this sounds like a hotel room I would like to stay in
Veetil Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 11:44 PM
Really, it is real fun..
Williams Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 3:02 PM
Mehnaz a great entree for the contest...David
Veetil Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 11:45 PM
thank you, David..
Sivey Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 9:55 AM
This is such a beautiful and amazing write my friend! I loved reading this delightful poem this morning! What a meaningful piece, Great Work!!
Veetil Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 11:47 PM
thanks Russell
Poet Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 7:28 AM
A great write on the theme of the contest!Enjoyed the read.Thanks for your inspiring words at my poem.
Veetil Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 11:46 PM
thank you ,Kash
Kendrick Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 7:01 AM
Enjoyed reading this creative and descriptive work this morn..If for a contest, reads like winning material to me..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always uplifting..Sara
Veetil Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 11:47 PM
thanks Sara ,for the kind words...
Trifiatis Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 6:08 AM
My dear, your poem: A sweet caress of a Spring's morning breeze!
Veetil Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 11:48 PM
thank you so much.....
Andresen Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 4:36 AM
I like your suggestion for this contest, Mehnaz. - Very good poem. - Have a wonderful Valentine's day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Veetil Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 11:49 PM
thanks Anne Lise....
Ougo Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 4:20 AM
they say a picture is worth a thousand words..but i think this Piece is worth a thousand pictures....deep write Veetil :-)
Veetil Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 11:50 PM
thank you, I am honored,...
Dietrich Avatar
February 13, 2013 at 11:39 PM
this is a very unusual but delightful room and I love the descriptive way you used to write of it.
Veetil Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 11:43 PM
yes ,it is ...it is fun to stay in such a place...
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