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In a Hotel Room

In a Hotel Room


Two night stay can really be nice
Suited to please for the right price
Room welcomes you, one, two or more
You have the key that opens the door

Chocolate covered strawberries await your arrival
Open the drawer there is always a bible
Queen size bed so soft to lay in
Window view a scenic mountain

The amenities are chosen with care
Wake up call, smell of coffee in the air
Whatever happens once you enter these walls
Hotel room doesn't speak, its seen it all

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/10/2013 8:26:00 PM
Deb; I like your poem. It is nice and clean. I just got back from a trip to New Mexico, with my brother and some friends. We stayed at La Quinta Hotel. We had a great time. Thanks for commenting on my poem. Many blessings. Lucilla
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Debra Falgout
Date: 2/10/2013 8:40:00 PM
Hope your trip was a good one, i love hotel stays, get away time, thanks for reading my poem, peace and love, debra
Date: 2/10/2013 7:46:00 PM
Nice room. Good luck in the contest. rick
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Debra Falgout
Date: 2/10/2013 8:41:00 PM
Believe me, had my share of good and bad hotel rooms, all very memorable, lol, take care, love debra

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