In a Hot Spot

Jeepers it is hot in here
I just burned my derriere
But I don't mind at all because
I am being cooked with love
Tenderly simmered in a pot
My skin fell off--I am so hot
I feel naked but so free
Juiciness all around me
In a bath of smokey steam
I'll soon be a yummy dream
Here come more friends to hang out
Seasoning poured out of a spout
Flavors seeping all around
Now here comes a swishing sound
Being twirled with a big spoon
In somebody's belly soon
I will be all nice and warm
Until the whole pot is gone
Of a great tomato sauce
Over spaghetti I am tossed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/21/2017 11:33:00 PM
You are filled with mischief and style. Loved this bit of whimsy. Can't imagine where the lines came from, but you've definitely tapped into a source and added flavors all your own.
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Date: 8/6/2016 5:17:00 AM
Lol...very creative!!!!!
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Date: 6/2/2016 1:55:00 AM
I found this very entertaining ! I praise your choice of words for crafting this poem...Brilliant !!! Cheers ~Red
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Date: 5/2/2016 11:16:00 AM
Robin, nice to see this one from you... LINDA
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Date: 4/4/2016 9:30:00 AM
Fabulous entertaining write Robin so good to see you back posting:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/20/2016 4:27:00 PM
This was excellent! So entertaining and unique(: Always, Laura
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Date: 12/23/2015 11:42:00 AM
A very well written poem, I enjoyed it very much Robin. I have missed your writing and I see that you have been hard at work! I love it. Great write Robin. Love, The Blue Poet! :)
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Date: 10/12/2015 7:59:00 AM
Robin, I neglected to respond to a comment you made several years ago. I was not as social as I am today. In any case, you have taken on a unique perspective here, and I applaud your ability to write with vegetable empathy.
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