Robin Davis Poet Rhyme

In a Hot Spot

Jeepers it is hot in here
I just burned my derriere
But I don't mind at all because
I am being cooked with love
Tenderly simmered in a pot
My skin fell off--I am so hot
I feel naked but so free
Juiciness all around me
In a bath of smokey steam
I'll soon be a yummy dream
Here come more friends to hang out
Seasoning poured out of a spout
Flavors seeping all around
Now here comes a swishing sound
Being twirled with a big spoon
In somebody's belly soon
I will be all nice and warm
Until the whole pot is gone
Of a great tomato sauce
Over spaghetti I am tossed

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Mark Peterson January 21, 2017 at 11:33 PM You are filled with mischief and style. Loved this bit of whimsy. Can't imagine where the lines came from, but you've definitely tapped into a source and added flavors all your own.

Pace Ink-U-Script August 6, 2016 at 5:17 AM Lol...very creative!!!!!

Red Fiery June 2, 2016 at 1:55 AM I found this very entertaining ! I praise your choice of words for crafting this poem...Brilliant !!! Cheers ~Red

Poet Destroyer A May 2, 2016 at 11:16 AM Robin, nice to see this one from you... LINDA

Jan Allison April 4, 2016 at 9:30 AM Fabulous entertaining write Robin so good to see you back posting:-) hugs jan xx

Laura Breidenthal March 20, 2016 at 4:27 PM This was excellent! So entertaining and unique(: Always, Laura

Chris Boskovski December 23, 2015 at 11:42 AM A very well written poem, I enjoyed it very much Robin. I have missed your writing and I see that you have been hard at work! I love it. Great write Robin. Love, The Blue Poet! :)

Duke Beaufort October 12, 2015 at 7:59 AM Robin, I neglected to respond to a comment you made several years ago. I was not as social as I am today. In any case, you have taken on a unique perspective here, and I applaud your ability to write with vegetable empathy.