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In a Hot Spot

Jeepers it is hot in here I just burned my derriere But I don't mind at all because I am being cooked with love Tenderly simmered in a pot My skin fell off--I am so hot I feel naked but so free Juiciness all around me In a bath of smokey steam I'll soon be a yummy dream Here come more friends to hang out Seasoning poured out of a spout Flavors seeping all around Now here comes a swishing sound Being twirled with a big spoon In somebody's belly soon I will be all nice and warm Until the whole pot is gone Of a great tomato sauce Over spaghetti I am tossed

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Mark Peterson

Date: 1/21/2017 11:33:00 PM

You are filled with mischief and style. Loved this bit of whimsy. Can't imagine where the lines came from, but you've definitely tapped into a source and added flavors all your own.

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 8/6/2016 5:17:00 AM

Lol...very creative!!!!!

Red Fiery

Date: 6/2/2016 1:55:00 AM

I found this very entertaining ! I praise your choice of words for crafting this poem...Brilliant !!! Cheers ~Red

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/2/2016 11:16:00 AM

Robin, nice to see this one from you... LINDA

Jan Allison

Date: 4/4/2016 9:30:00 AM

Fabulous entertaining write Robin so good to see you back posting:-) hugs jan xx

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/20/2016 4:27:00 PM

This was excellent! So entertaining and unique(: Always, Laura

Chris Boskovski

Date: 12/23/2015 11:42:00 AM

A very well written poem, I enjoyed it very much Robin. I have missed your writing and I see that you have been hard at work! I love it. Great write Robin. Love, The Blue Poet! :)

Duke Beaufort

Date: 10/12/2015 7:59:00 AM

Robin, I neglected to respond to a comment you made several years ago. I was not as social as I am today. In any case, you have taken on a unique perspective here, and I applaud your ability to write with vegetable empathy.