In a Heartbeat

Deep underground hear the moaning sounds
Of all the other forgotten Lovers
Who forever cry to one another-
That life was well 'til Love was found!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Davis Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 6:45 PM
Chan The Man This is a creative and unique write. I like how you put this poem together. Very different but interesting. Nicely done Thanks for the wonderful comment on my Crazy Friends poem. Huggies
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February 4, 2014 at 9:52 AM
Thanks as always, Sweet Pea <3
Anglesey Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 11:04 PM
You have a great sense of irony. Terrific poem with a super title. Well done :)
That Archaic Poet Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 11:12 PM
Thank you; it makes me happy that you recognize and appreciate the irony. I wasn't too sure about posting this one, but your read and response makes me glad I did. Thanks again! :)
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