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In a First Class Train

in a first class train third class passenger travels due respect's not tuned

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Date: 9/27/2014 5:59:00 AM

BL this has just got to be one of your finest poem yet,,you have just described the whole world..amazingly in 17 syllables

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/27/2014 8:14:00 AM

My lovely friend, I am captive before you always and fell better to go ahead with loving inspiration. Loved always,bl

Date: 9/25/2014 11:10:00 PM

This is a bitter truth as per words but the lines have a different message... Senryu, Brilliantly done sir

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/27/2014 8:16:00 AM

Thanks a lot my lovely friend for your comment. It carries a lot from different ways. It's too much practical in the world. Loved always,bl