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In a First Class Train

in a first class train
                                      third class passenger travels 
                                         due respect's not tuned

Copyright © Bl Devnath | Year Posted 2014

discriminationintrospectionlifesenryu

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September 27, 2014 at 5:59 AM

BL this has just got to be one of your finest poem yet,,you have just described the whole world..amazingly in 17 syllables

September 27, 2014 at 8:14 AM

My lovely friend, I am captive before you always and fell better to go ahead with loving inspiration. Loved always,bl

September 25, 2014 at 11:10 PM

This is a bitter truth as per words but the lines have a different message... Senryu, Brilliantly done sir

September 27, 2014 at 8:16 AM

Thanks a lot my lovely friend for your comment. It carries a lot from different ways. It's too much practical in the world. Loved always,bl

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