In A Field of Sunflowers

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In a field of golden sunflowers, Their faces turned towards the sun's warm embrace, A great white shark glides through the azure depths, Silent predator with a fearsome face. A whip-poor-will calls out in the twilight, Its haunting song echoing through the trees, A melody of melancholy and mystery, A whispered secret carried on the breeze. Flowery words bloom and scatter like petals, Poetic verses woven with delicate care, Each line a tapestry of emotions and dreams, A language of the heart, laid bare. In this tapestry of nature's wonders, Sunflowers, shark, whip-poor-will, and words, A symphony of beauty and danger, A dance of light and shadow, seen and heard. Never knowing if the shark will be appearing Or if the innocent sunflower will bloom Hope the shark is gone with his jeering Down where golden sunflower should illume

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Date: 5/5/2024 10:10:00 PM
Quite a threesome, Sara! Oh and also with words! A foursome
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/6/2024 3:18:00 AM
Andrea, now it makes you wonder what is that poem about? Sara K
Date: 5/5/2024 8:55:00 AM
Your poem lifts our conception of nature up high. Verily a beautiful poem.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/5/2024 4:16:00 PM
Victor, I am delighted that you saw beauty in it. Sara K
Date: 5/5/2024 6:30:00 AM
A beautiful poem, Sara. In sync with rhythms of nature.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/5/2024 4:15:00 PM
Why, thank you, Vijay. Sara K
Date: 5/4/2024 10:40:00 PM
Lovely poem I simply adore warm embrace from sunflowers and the way schools of sharks mingle in the cool waters this is an awesome write.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/5/2024 3:34:00 AM
Yolanda, we just don't want to be where there are schools of sharks do we. Your visit was encouraging. Sara K
Date: 5/4/2024 7:06:00 PM
wonderful poem, sunflowers mean a lot to me, so loving memories, i loved the beautiful images your used, great emotion of reading thanks poet
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/5/2024 3:32:00 AM
Glad you saw it as wonderful, Yann.
Date: 5/4/2024 2:02:00 PM
The beauty of nature and the danger combined beautifully with your words Sara! Debx
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/4/2024 2:41:00 PM
I think that is really how we live our lives only we don't know what is going on most of the time. Thanks for your support in my writing endeavors. Sara K
Date: 5/4/2024 1:24:00 PM
Sara, your poem beautifully explores the contrast between beauty and danger in nature. The text delves into the concept of light and shadow, innocence and threat, by using great imagery such as sunflowers, a shark, a whip-poor-will, and a poetic syntax used to depict them.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/4/2024 2:39:00 PM
Why, thank you, Lasaad, for your affirmation of my work. Your visits are so supportive. Sara K
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