In a Dream

floating… yellow heat

banana float, tasting good

blue, blue sky…life….. great!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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November 9, 2012 at 10:44 AM
I am not a pro on any form of poetry but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it Lorraine. I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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November 9, 2012 at 5:02 AM
A very well written haiku poem, Lorraine. - Lovely - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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November 8, 2012 at 4:40 PM
very uplifting Lorraine. Rollo
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November 8, 2012 at 4:02 PM
sounds amazing, love elizabeth
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