In a Bottle
I followed your trajectory with my telescope
Over the moon a complete eclipse
While laying on your back you saw
The man in the moon
You wrote him a note put in a bottle
Across the universe it sailed
He did not return a signature
But he laughed when he saw yours
As you ran down the hill you fell
x rays revealed you have one lung
The open book and glass of wine
Cigar smoke exists the other one
Like the shooting star
From you I am never far
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