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In a Bottle

heart in a  bottle
captive sylph of current's  past
freed by Cupid’s dart





July 21,2014    11. 10pm






Fourth Place
Contest: One Solo Epic/Senryu-In A Bottle
Judged: 8/20/14
Sponsor: Poetess Linda/PD

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Liam Mcdaid

October 7, 2014 at 7:58 AM

beautifully painted picture leonora congrats on your win well deserved

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 21, 2014 at 5:13 AM

Congrats on the win with this nice write,

Len Gasun

August 26, 2014 at 11:30 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Dr. Ram. Big hugs!

Robert Lindley

August 20, 2014 at 10:10 PM

LOVE IT... Congrats on your win!!!

Len Gasun

August 26, 2014 at 11:29 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Robert! Big hugs!

Tim Smith

August 20, 2014 at 7:30 PM

Beautiful Leonora...congrats Tim

Len Gasun

August 26, 2014 at 11:29 AM

Thank you so much for your wins as well. I'll visit you soon.

Len Gasun

August 26, 2014 at 11:28 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Tim. Big hugs!

Andrea Dietrich

August 20, 2014 at 3:14 PM

I like your vocabulary in this one, sweetie. Congrats for the win.

Len Gasun

August 26, 2014 at 11:27 AM

;)) Thank you so much my very dear friend Andrea but I hope i've used it right. Big hugs!

Poet Destroyer A

August 20, 2014 at 9:36 AM

Hello Sweet SIS,,, Hope you are well, On this senryu, I enjoyed the lover's note in a bottle.. :) :) :) Congratulations!!! Thank you for the awesome Bottled Up senryu. Stop by my latest blog, "You Sunk My "BATTLESHIP" :)" if you like. I enjoyed closing this contest. Always and forever your BFF for life ~LINDA~

Len Gasun

August 26, 2014 at 11:24 AM

Hi my ever loving sis and BFF of mine! I'm fine despite my strenuous load of work in school especially the first 2 days of the week. How about you? I'm thanking you once again for the win and for appreciating my humble poem my dearest sis. From the bottom of my hear,t forever thanks for everything! iloveu.

Paul Callus

August 20, 2014 at 9:26 AM

....back with congrats, Leonora, on a deserved win....paul

Len Gasun

August 26, 2014 at 11:17 AM

Thank you so much my very dear friend Paul. Many warm congrats on your wins as well. I'll visit you soon ok. Biggest hugs back at you!

Scott Thirtyseven

August 1, 2014 at 10:25 AM

Fantastic.

Len Gasun

August 5, 2014 at 12:56 PM

Thank u so much my dear friend scott. Big hugs!

Andrea Dietrich

July 29, 2014 at 5:51 PM

this is really cute. My favorite of them all today! thanks for stopping by my work today with your nice note.

Len Gasun

August 1, 2014 at 5:54 AM

Thank u so much as well my dear friend Andrea. I'm here at soup for a while then proceed again to some paper works for tomorrow's activity. God bless. Many hugs!

Robert Lindley

July 26, 2014 at 11:59 PM

A romantic write my friend... Sings of freedom's grace!!! Good luck in the contest!

Len Gasun

August 1, 2014 at 5:55 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Robert. Many hugs! God bless!

Mark Trichet

July 21, 2014 at 10:43 PM

Beautifully written Leonora. Loved it and finger's crossed for you...

Len Gasun

July 24, 2014 at 10:27 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Mark. I'll visit you soon. Big hugs!

Poet Destroyer A

July 21, 2014 at 10:37 PM

AWESOMELY DONE MY SIS... Hi, Stopping by to say hi, and thank you for stopping by. My situation's still the same. You are in my thoughts, my sis and Bff.... I will come back another day... Goodnight.. Linda

Len Gasun

July 24, 2014 at 10:26 AM

Hello my ever loving sis and BFF! Missing u so much. Sending you my loving hugs, smiles and kisses right away. I always hope & pray that you'll be alright soon my dearest sis. I'm always here for you. Talk to u soon, ok. By the way, thank you so much for this very lovely comments. I hope you'll like my poem. I Love u always & forever my evrdearest sis-bff. God bless! Many lovely hugs for you!