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she says take a rest but i've the rest of my life to take one of these and say sieste mid day nap time retiring into retirement and just as planned i'm there sitting on a chair but my eyes are shut and my head is hanging but not sleeping but crying for not as planned you are no where to be found and reality keeps me even from trying to dream because i want you with me for real

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Date: 9/26/2019 11:08:00 AM
This is sweet, I hope she complies.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 9/27/2019 5:28:00 AM
Some day hopefully, Richard. Thanks.
Date: 9/26/2019 2:15:00 AM
Potent desires beyond ~ Aloha always William
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William Kekaula
Date: 9/26/2019 7:59:00 PM
LOL, I was a Mexicano between Bath, ME and Boston, MA '69
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 9/26/2019 9:15:00 AM
Thank you William. I was a 9 year old Haole on Oahu in 1969. Aloha.