Impromptu

my eggs are
hanging like
grapes wanting
to be juiced

but when cold
my eggs look
like prunes so
tell me what

actually is
prune juice
and why can't
i find raisin juice

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 5/16/2019 2:44:00 PM
Delightfully twisted ;)
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 5/17/2019 11:51:00 PM
I think a twist in a poem is better if it's a twisted twist Maureen.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 5/17/2019 6:55:00 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed, Maureen. Thanks.
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