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Impromptu

i woke to the rapid fire of rain a Chinese water torture test testing itself on the roof above my forehead then came lightning always followed by thunder never one without the other as my stomach rumbled waking empty but i being a primitive man hid back under covers fearing to face the day and or nature

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Date: 4/26/2019 7:57:00 AM
Excellent descriptive piece, I feel it. x
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/26/2019 9:41:00 AM
Cold and wet. Rather unappealing. Not heavy though, fingers crossed, the rivers be flooding.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 4/26/2019 9:01:00 AM
Thank you Maureen. It's really doing this outside. How is your weather?

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