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Impromptu

the time is 3:13 the day is 3/13 forgetting to say AM or PM or what year remember my Muse someday in the future 3:13 perhaps 3/13/20 something might happen to avoid any more confusion between us i'll say 1513 narrowing down the time when something but maybe nothing might happen but how to narrow down the year

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Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 3/13/2019 1:10:00 PM

;oo) Picasso! Why two noses? Sorry, had to give you someth'n, the poem sent me a few places.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/14/2019 10:00:00 AM

...guessing somewhere in the middle of the Us of A

Jeff Connelly
Date: 3/13/2019 1:17:00 PM

Narrowing down my whereabouts I just had to change my clocks one hour ahead; thus the adage, "Spring ahead; Fall behind." But my Muse is now an hour behind. She has never seen snow or a Picasso other then photos. Thanks Maureen at least for someth'n. Better then noth'n.