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Impromptu

haiku in azul blues playing passionately sadly i'm watching hearing her movements my baton conducts her song silently dancing words forming absurd surreal reality speaks morris code feet dance dash dash dash dash dot dot dash dot dot dot dot dot dash dash but one leads to two peacefully she sleeps tomorrow i will ask her would you like to dance

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/1/2019 10:35:00 AM

Jeff, I like the musicality of this. Panagiota

Jeff Connelly
Date: 3/1/2019 11:17:00 AM

Thank you so much Panagiota. It's all haiku 5 7 5 except for the morris code lines of dots and dashes which are 6 8 6. Hoping that the people will read the morris code to put the poem together. Grateful for the comment. Thanks again.