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Impromptu

so they say god took a day of rest making the world i am in no way saying i am god because i don't create or make poems instead intaking the breath of my Muse who choses my words and so said today take a day off and r e s t

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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 2/16/2019 11:51:00 AM

I like it :)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 2/17/2019 6:55:00 PM

Thank you, Jeff. I suggest using your first line if you would rather not create titles, to draw people in, peak interest; that and commenting on other poets works, your readership will expand.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 2/16/2019 10:58:00 PM

Thanks so much Maureen. You seem to be the only one that is keen on my poetry; so I am always happy to read a remark from you. You can be harsh- PLEASE. I spout these out as if literally from a turned on faucet. I'm sure in the real world, there is need for improvement. Feel free to speak; I am an open book, but thank you all the same Maureen-my only fan.