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Impromptu

so they
say god
took
a day
of rest
making
the world

i am
in no way
saying
i am
god
because
i don't

create
or
make
poems
instead
intaking
the breath

of my Muse
who 
choses
my words
and so
said
today

take
a day
off and
r
e
s
t

musei do not know?

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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

February 16, 2019 at 11:51 AM

I like it :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

February 17, 2019 at 6:55 PM

Thank you, Jeff. I suggest using your first line if you would rather not create titles, to draw people in, peak interest; that and commenting on other poets works, your readership will expand.

Jeff Connelly

February 16, 2019 at 10:58 PM

Thanks so much Maureen. You seem to be the only one that is keen on my poetry; so I am always happy to read a remark from you. You can be harsh- PLEASE. I spout these out as if literally from a turned on faucet. I'm sure in the real world, there is need for improvement. Feel free to speak; I am an open book, but thank you all the same Maureen-my only fan.

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