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Impromptu

losing ground slipping shifting nearing a cliff edge not pushed jumping wanting to find the feel of flying close eyed floating free form from normalcy objectionably easy easing myself down cloudless cielo meeting the ground mi mujer Latino

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Date: 1/23/2023 10:47:00 AM
Well, I can see the first several lines of this like in a cartoon.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 1/25/2023 1:58:00 PM
I like that. The rest of it played out like a cartoon in real life. Thank you for reading and commenting Miranda.

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