Impromptu

losing ground
slipping
shifting
nearing
a cliff
edge

not pushed
jumping
wanting
to find
the feel
of flying

close eyed
floating free
form from
normalcy
objectionably
easy

easing
myself down
cloudless cielo
meeting
the ground
mi mujer Latino
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Hawley Avatar
January 23, 2023 at 10:47 AM
Well, I can see the first several lines of this like in a cartoon.
Connelly Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 1:58 PM
I like that. The rest of it played out like a cartoon in real life. Thank you for reading and commenting Miranda.
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