Poet Destroyer A Poet Couplet

Imprisoned - Jun-Jun Villanueva

IMPRISONED     (collaboration)


by~  Jun-jun Villanueva

Urbane cavalcade - flaunt in gaiety
Warbling hymns in ego - cyclicity
Jigging gracile moves in vivacity
Relishing in zest in this gravity
Kinsfolk in flamboyant fete - oh its fate?
Smiles, elation in face delineate
Like nothing's wrong makes me exasperate
No one cares? No one adores? it's too late
Recurrent nightmares peeve me in sublime
Making incubuses remorse in rhyme
Bequeathing qualm, fright and fear - death like crime
Kith and kin in laughs while I'm in grave time...


by~ Poet Destroyer

Twittering chime parade of glee
Unspectacular weed flowing trough me.
Boxed in a box like a tick or flea.
No one understands- what they can't see!
Outside myself holding my breath-
Or should I say what is left?
Trapping torment with false courtesy.
Preexisted past, without certainty.
Locked in a sanctuary grave of ivory ribs,
My life in a vault- trashed crib.
Feet lashing against my skin.
Twirling the rootless valves of sin.
No one cares! No one adores!
My prison trash coffin brought ashore.


A collaboration with * Jun-jun Villanueva

My collaboration contest

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Skat A February 4, 2016 at 10:54 PM interesting **SKAT**

Richard D Seal September 8, 2013 at 5:57 PM Just dropping by to ask how you are. Take care, Richard

Nathan D. October 27, 2011 at 10:09 AM you give people a chance to collab with you and this is what you get .... great job!!!

Jun-Jun Villanueva August 27, 2011 at 8:04 PM " SOUP MAIL " my friend~~~~another collaboration is coming in our way....LOL~~~smile for a new day~~~*-*junjun

Elizabeth Wesley August 23, 2011 at 10:53 PM These collaborations are so interesting, a meeting of minds to tell a story. Loved it as it is well done.

Andrea Dietrich August 23, 2011 at 12:42 AM A very fun read, LInda. Some of the lines I loved were " trashed crib" and "feet lashing against my skin". You are the wizard of collaboration poems!!

Matthew Anish August 22, 2011 at 9:50 PM You tell a sad tale with this one. Keep it up! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Phyllis Babcock August 22, 2011 at 3:03 PM Enjoyed this dual piece of poetry today. Just want to say that cabbage rolls is a staple in the midst of this province. It is a great veg food and one I think you would enjoy. You can make it rice and onion or you can use bacon or ground beef so it can be made several ways. We do not use meat in ours and bake it by adding a can of tomato soup. Yummy. love phyl

John Loving Iii August 21, 2011 at 8:42 PM i cared . i adored. but no one answered my text. did they!!!!!!!!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 21, 2011 at 6:24 PM oh another goodie which I already read on jun-jun's work.. good luck PD and jun-jun ... we are in Florida on vacation now for two weeks till after Labor Day .. with three little grand babies..so cute..so fun.. Ron is so tired..haha..luv it... glad my Living Liquid gave u a super contest idea..as I am hanging up my contest spurs for now my BFF... your BFF needs a break luv.. but not from friendship forever.

James Peranteau August 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM I can just see, the two of you poets, on a stage, hammering this one out ! I gotta go see the write before this, so I'll save my heys and yaaas !, james

Kyle Kriticos August 19, 2011 at 11:52 PM u guys worked very well together. this flowed so well. Is 3 a crowd? Lol jk

James Foulk August 19, 2011 at 10:41 PM a great piece of work, enjoyed it. thank you for commenting on drive in theature memories.

Elizabeth Wesley August 19, 2011 at 2:55 PM I admire this idea, I was invited to do but my mind couldn't grasp the idea. The two of you flow so well.

Sara Kendrick August 19, 2011 at 7:42 AM Interesting one..So many fine works in this group..Soup mail..Sara

Don Johnson August 19, 2011 at 4:48 AM no escape for me ...uncertainty, watch out for the vault trashed crib, rootless panting raging sin, not within:) entertaining words are here, johnsons been n drank his beer...

Chiquitachiamaka Baity August 19, 2011 at 2:05 AM great collabotation!!!!!!

Poet Destroyer A August 19, 2011 at 12:51 AM wow! he posted this already... xool.... And thank you Linda, have fun on your forever honeymoon.... p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 19, 2011 at 12:47 AM oh yes this one is fantastico PD my BFF and I read it on jun-jun's list of poetry.. excellent combo ..good luck in the contest.. your BFF in the middle of packing trying to sleep and comment..oh..